Tale Posted May 3, 2014 Author Share Posted May 3, 2014 Understanding the character is how I know whether they're to be brave or frightened in a situation. Where I know if they'll be curious, what they might be focused on, when they'll be defiant. Without that they're just simple reactions. They can only answer questions and occasionally tilt their heads. Have you tried taking the character, coming up with a few ordinary, mundane scenarios that don't make for a good story but make up important pillars of this guy's life and writing a scene a few pages long for each of those as an exercise? Then write a couple of scenes where something less ordinary happens, the guy is robbed or he won the lottery and he's now having his first amazing holiday and try to imagine the guy being stressed and excited and in every scene where applicable work out a past, and the guy's plans for the future, his pattern of thinking and who the people in his life are ect. Another way to go may be to imagine a character from a show/movie/book and writing him into the role and letting him evolve into your own creation as the story progresses. Or to imagine an actor/friend/acquaintance and write the role as if for them as a kind of guideline to get you started (not that the character has to be like them, but you can imagine them playing the character in your head). I think I'm satisfied writing a brief biography that includes events relevant to the themes of the book for the moment. But I do like your ideas and would be glad to add them to the toolbox for future use. "Show me a man who "plays fair" and I'll show you a very talented cheater." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keyrock Posted May 3, 2014 Share Posted May 3, 2014 I went on a 2 hour long bike ride, including a trek up Avon Mountain, which is a roughly 3, maybe 3.5 mile long climb at a 10% gradient. I took some pictures while up there. 3 RFK Jr 2024 "Any organization created out of fear must create fear to survive." - Bill Hicks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mor Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 ^beautiful, I am jealous. I don't know if its the summer\winter effect, but pastoral green sights is one of the things I miss the most in my current place of residents. Although, I suppose it only says that I am being lazy, since in couple of hours drive we can visit all nature feature from lush forest green to marvelous desert canyon red shades, and activities from all across the board... Anyway, today I was thankful to the people who still use WEP encryption or stupid passwords Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orogun01 Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 I never got what the big deal was with nature, I mean what can you do with it?....or to it? I'd say the answer to that question is kind of like the answer to "who's the sucker in this poker game?"* *If you can't tell, it's you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mor Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 (edited) Or do to you.. if you are planing to play giddy up, keep in mind that when that horse get excited, he is going to grow a fifth leg.. As for nature, any chance that you just take common things for granted i.e. the allure of the exotic? Edited May 4, 2014 by Mor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BruceVC Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 Well I just got back from that wedding in the mountains and we had a really good time. Apart from the picturesque views and general relaxation the wedding itself was very sincere and meaningful to all the friends of the groom and bride It was a Polish\South Africa theme because the bride is Polish so it was cool to see some of the Polish wedding traditions incorporated into the typical South African wedding structure. For example a Polish tradition during the dinner service is for the wedding couple to eat bread and drink a tot of Vodka, you then break the tot glasses. Also during the grooms speech he did 3 different speeches. One in Polish ( well he attempted to speak Polish ), one in English and one in Afrikaans. But I really admired the fact he tried really hard to get the Polish speech part right out of respect for his wife's family Then the food was excellent and the guests generally very fun and easy to get along with, we drank loads of Tequila. I also met this really attractive and interesting girl who I'll be taking out for dinner. So I can honestly say " what an awesome weekend " 5 "Abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is and saw Virtue in her shape how lovely: and pined his loss” John Milton "We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing.” - George Bernard Shaw "What counts in life is not the mere fact that we have lived. It is what difference we have made to the lives of others that will determine the significance of the life we lead" - Nelson Mandela Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Walsingham Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 Resentful about compromising my holiday to clear the house drains I drank a treble scotch and pretended sticking my hand into rancid solidified fat was some sort of indie kickstarter. Actually quite fun. Although I'm about to soak my hands in bleach to get the rancid smell off. "It wasn't lies. It was just... bull****"." -Elwood Blues tarna's dead; processing... complete. Disappointed by Universe. RIP Hades/Sand/etc. Here's hoping your next alt has a harp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ManifestedISO Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 England sounds terrifying. 1 All Stop. On Screen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mor Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 Indeed, though its nothing out of the ordinary when you do a thorough cleaning, it helps if you don't neglect stuff too much, a lesson I learned in the university after cleaning the kitchen left my hands pealing\hurting for a week :/ Btw walsy, just in case you never heard of it, in any homedepo you can get chemical solution that would make your pipes squeaky clean in half an hour.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Walsingham Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 Indeed, though its nothing out of the ordinary when you do a thorough cleaning, it helps if you don't neglect stuff too much, a lesson I learned in the university after cleaning the kitchen left my hands pealing\hurting for a week :/ Btw walsy, just in case you never heard of it, in any homedepo you can get chemical solution that would make your pipes squeaky clean in half an hour.. I appreciate the thought, but rice starch and cooking fat forms a solid chalky greasy substance that would fend off xenomorph excretions. A big spoon, and abandoning all pretense of cleanliness is a lot cheaper and simpler. Even if I have had a sort of prickly heat sensation all over my hands for the last two hours. I can only assume some sort of abyssal flesh eating bacteria. "It wasn't lies. It was just... bull****"." -Elwood Blues tarna's dead; processing... complete. Disappointed by Universe. RIP Hades/Sand/etc. Here's hoping your next alt has a harp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PK htiw klaw eriF Posted May 4, 2014 Share Posted May 4, 2014 Studied quite a bit. Going to play New Vegas then get some sleep. I never got what the big deal was with nature, I mean what can you do with it?....or to it? *psst* Wrong alt. 2 "Akiva Goldsman and Alex Kurtzman run the 21st century version of MK ULTRA." - majestic "you're a damned filthy lying robot and you deserve to die and burn in hell." - Bartimaeus "Without individual thinking you can't notice the plot holes." - InsaneCommander "Just feed off the suffering of gamers." - Malcador "You are calling my taste crap." -Hurlshort "thankfully it seems like the creators like Hungary less this time around." - Sarex "Don't forget the wakame, dumbass" -Keyrock "Are you trolling or just being inadvertently nonsensical?' -Pidesco "we have already been forced to admit you are at least human" - uuuhhii "I refuse to buy from non-woke businesses" - HoonDing "feral camels are now considered a pest" - Gorth "Melkathi is known to be an overly critical grumpy person" - Melkathi "Oddly enough Sanderson was a lot more direct despite being a Mormon" - Zoraptor "I found it greatly disturbing to scroll through my cartoon's halfing selection of genitalias." - Wormerine "I love cheese despite the pain and carnage." - ShadySands Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woldan Posted May 5, 2014 Share Posted May 5, 2014 (edited) Finally got the present for my uncle's 50th birthday. Its a Swiss bayonet M1889 96/11, made in 1889, one of the finest bayonets ever made, kind of hard to obtain and not cheap either. The quality of that blade not just blows my mind, it nukes the hell out of it. Even high quality blades in the several hundred bucks category are put to shame by this thing. Its also razor sharp and very pointy, like it just left the factory, which is cool for a blade thats 125 years old. No oxidation whatsoever and it balances so well it would make a devastating dagger when not mounted on a rifle. Pics: Photo with my German Solingen M1908B bayonet (bottom). Edited May 5, 2014 by Woldan 2 I gazed at the dead, and for one dark moment I saw a banquet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malcador Posted May 5, 2014 Share Posted May 5, 2014 Bunch of customers visiting, as well as some internal suits. So this week will be sucky as everyone'll be in the office and we have to be on best behaviour (all part of a further scam of the client as well). Why has elegance found so little following? Elegance has the disadvantage that hard work is needed to achieve it and a good education to appreciate it. - Edsger Wybe Dijkstra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mor Posted May 5, 2014 Share Posted May 5, 2014 (edited) In case you working in customer service, I'd suggest thinking about other things you can do, because you sound like you are near the end of your "rotation" Edited May 5, 2014 by Mor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malcador Posted May 5, 2014 Share Posted May 5, 2014 Sort of a customer service role, mainly listening to them complain about an application or complain about the development I've done as it doesn't meet with some insane specification they've invented. Right now though, is a bit of unseemly business where we're using the letter of a spec to weasel out of not fixing a POS patch. Why has elegance found so little following? Elegance has the disadvantage that hard work is needed to achieve it and a good education to appreciate it. - Edsger Wybe Dijkstra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ManifestedISO Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Finally. The fickle collecting-gods smiled briefly. Black Series 6" Stormtrooper figures have been unavailable at normal MSRP, going for double value on Amazon--until today, for a few minutes. Within the last hour, actually. Got two figures for only 10%+ over ... $22.99 vs. $19.99. Moments later, single 'trooper price went back up to $38.99. 2 All Stop. On Screen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guard Dog Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 I'd just like to say how much I hate... HATE... HATE the Stihl M180c chainsaw. It is without the crappiest, most useless, unreliable, chewed up, spit out dried up piece of monkey poop that has ever been stuffed into a chainsaw case. It won't start, it floods the engine on the second crank unless you go to half throttle but it won't start from half throttle unless the engine is warm but it can't get warm because it won't start. And even if, by some chance, miracle, or divine intervention you actually do get it started the chain will lose tension after just five minutes of light use. Then when you try to shut it down to tension the chain you find out the damned thing that would not start, now won't shut off because the wretched little cheap misbegotten spring from the spring loaded shut down switch broke. And this miserable SOB was expensive. I could have had a mid model Husqvarna for the same price. Heck I'd have been better off with a box full of trained termites. If I did an Indian rain dance and prayed for lighting the strike the tree it would probably have gotten trimmed a lot faster. I hope the little twit at Ace Hardware in Millington who sold me this thing dies a slow and painful death and that he takes the engineers who designed it with him. /rant Hey guys, I've got a two year old Stihl chainsaw for sale, hardly ever used.PM me if interested. 3 "While it is true you learn with age, the down side is what you often learn is what a damn fool you were before" Thomas Sowell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JadedWolf Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Hey guys, I've got a two year old Stihl chainsaw for sale, hardly ever used.PM me if interested. You make it sound like such a sweet deal, but no thanks anyway. 3 Never attribute to malice that which can adequately be explained by incompetence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malcador Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Chainsaw murderers are lazy these days...can't even go find their victims. Why has elegance found so little following? Elegance has the disadvantage that hard work is needed to achieve it and a good education to appreciate it. - Edsger Wybe Dijkstra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BruceVC Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Hey guys, I've got a two year old Stihl chainsaw for sale, hardly ever used.PM me if interested. Hey guys, I've got a two year old Stihl chainsaw for sale, hardly ever used.PM me if interested. You make it sound like such a sweet deal, but no thanks anyway. Yeah GD Jadedmeister is right on this one. You need to work on your sales and marketing my friend "Abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is and saw Virtue in her shape how lovely: and pined his loss” John Milton "We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing.” - George Bernard Shaw "What counts in life is not the mere fact that we have lived. It is what difference we have made to the lives of others that will determine the significance of the life we lead" - Nelson Mandela Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkreku Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 I'd just like to say how much I hate... HATE... HATE the Stihl M180c chainsaw. It is without the crappiest, most useless, unreliable, chewed up, spit out dried up piece of monkey poop that has ever been stuffed into a chainsaw case. It won't start, it floods the engine on the second crank unless you go to half throttle but it won't start from half throttle unless the engine is warm but it can't get warm because it won't start. And even if, by some chance, miracle, or divine intervention you actually do get it started the chain will lose tension after just five minutes of light use. Then when you try to shut it down to tension the chain you find out the damned thing that would not start, now won't shut off because the wretched little cheap misbegotten spring from the spring loaded shut down switch broke. And this miserable SOB was expensive. I could have had a mid model Husqvarna for the same price. Heck I'd have been better off with a box full of trained termites. If I did an Indian rain dance and prayed for lighting the strike the tree it would probably have gotten trimmed a lot faster. I hope the little twit at Ace Hardware in Millington who sold me this thing dies a slow and painful death and that he takes the engineers who designed it with him. /rant Hey guys, I've got a two year old Stihl chainsaw for sale, hardly ever used.PM me if interested. But why didn't you get a Husqvarna? http://www.chainsawsdirect.com/chain-saw-style-reviews/2-gas-chain-saw-reviews.html Swedes, go to: Spel2, for the latest game reviews in swedish! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raithe Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 I need to get some research done for work related activity. For some reason, possibly not helped by a patch of wake/doze/wake/doze sleep this past month I've got stuck in a ridiculous procrastination patch and minor pokes rather then solid get to grips with it. Also, I've been invited to TeslaCon towards the end of the year. I might have to give some thought to suitable steampunk costuming for the occasion. "Cuius testiculos habeas, habeas cardia et cerebellum." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woldan Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 (edited) Watched ants from two different ant hills making contact, what first looked like a little harmless skirmish with minor losses suddenly turned in a massive full blown battle with one side getting totally annihilated, it was like in a horror movie. The attacking ants (big red & black ones) hunted down and totally slaughtered the small helpless black ones, they bit off their heads by the hundreds, bit them in half, sprayed acid into their faces, chewed the already dead bodies into pieces with their huge mouthpieces, they were totally going insane and even attacked inanimate objects. They eventually pushed the little black ones back to their hills entry hole and I watched a seemingly endless amount of big ants invading the enemy hill. I can only imagine whats going on in there right now, a little big drama in my garden. I almost wanted to interfere to help the black ones, but thats nature.- What have I learned today? Nature is a bloodthirsty b!tch that spits on the weak. And being a small ant sucks. Edited May 6, 2014 by Woldan 7 I gazed at the dead, and for one dark moment I saw a banquet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aluminiumtrioxid Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Thinking about getting a miniature rose, although nobody I know managed to keep them alive indoors for extended periods of time. "Lulz is not the highest aspiration of art and mankind, no matter what the Encyclopedia Dramatica says." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadySands Posted May 6, 2014 Share Posted May 6, 2014 Watched ants from two different ant hills making contact, what first looked like a little harmless skirmish with minor losses suddenly turned in a massive full blown battle with one side getting totally annihilated, it was like in a horror movie. The attacking ants (big red & black ones) hunted down and totally slaughtered the small helpless black ones, they bit off their heads by the hundreds, bit them in half, sprayed acid into their faces, chewed the already dead bodies into pieces with their huge mouthpieces, they were totally going insane and even attacked inanimate objects. They eventually pushed the little black ones back to their hills entry hole and I watched a seemingly endless amount of big ants invading the enemy hill. I can only imagine whats going on in there right now, a little big drama in my garden. I almost wanted to interfere to help the black ones, but thats nature.- What have I learned today? Nature is a bloodthirsty b!tch that spits on the weak. And being a small ant sucks. Right after I read that I saw this 2 Free games updated 3/4/21 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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