You know...it's really not that bad.
Gaider isn't much of a novelist, but atleast he didn't write the Mass Effect novels. They were terrible.
Gaider though, is a really good video game writer. I'm thinking maybe that as a side project, instead of writing a Dragon Age novel, he should have scripted a
comic book miniseries and had each chapter's art done by a different aspiring comic book artists within the ranks of Bio's art dept. That would probably mask some of his
awkward, virgin novelist prose.