Yes, this sounds kind of... hilarious or foolish maybe but come now, I'm just trying at a bit of some fiction. I'm not being specific really because I cannot be. The current progress of my work doesn't allow for much more detail. Keeping in mind I only need "Character/Location ideas for a story". I didn't think how utterly bad Freedor's name was. I knew it had the word "free" and that stretched it but I only now realize just how disappointing that name really is.
I need names...
Meadevil era. Humans, dwarves, waning elf populations. A World War event happened with "the Alliance" (need new name) versus empire of Durran. Durran raised powerful dark men who enslaved the populations and began to destroy life itself, for "unknown reasons" (will elaborate further on...) After war with Alliance victory, Durran seems nothing but villages but the Alliance also becomes weak. Durran becomes stronger and is renamed Khire and some of the people of alliance guys are suspicious. Elf land* and Castine, also in the Alliance are dormant. Khire works behind the scenes and begins infiltration of *human land* via bribing a senator. Large (Australia size) island is in middle of planet (say planet is half-size of earth for distance figuring purposes) This island is Stalvert and becomes another target of infiltration. it is wanted as a beachhead. Stalvert should easily fall to Khire troops* (*no special name yet ie stormtroopers) An elite human scout/commando is on his way in his ship to trade @ stalvert with his young son and notices various Khire ships. Meanwhile a humble senator in Freedor brings his concerns to the senate where they are at best delayed, worst ignored. Story ends here except for a bit thats to rough at this point to add. The scout may have to be the advance to turn things around in Stalvert. (EDIT VERSION)
This is all I have so far.
Locations
"the Alliance" (need new name)
human land * "good" human people country
Khire ("former Durran") * "evil" country; human, elf, human/elves
elf land (working title) * old ally; elf
Castine (working title) * old ally; dwarf
Stalvert * peaceful island nation; human
Planet x (working title) * (medevil story not too important)
Cities/Provinces
Baysteer * capital and seaport of Stalvert
Dorbriar * province with the bribed guy
(working title) * capital province
city (working title) * freedor capital city
* province nearby Dorbriar, represneted by a "good guy" who spies on the "bad guy" in Dorbriar
(several other locations to come)
People final=won't change
Jonns (final)* senator trying to convince senate of Khire's evils, minor province* near capital (*working title)
Tierney (final)* senator, friend of Jonns
2 unimportant senators * friends of Jonns
Douglas * bribed guy from Dorbriar
Valorin * Chancellor of x(good) Senate
Venicent (final)* senior senator ignorant of Khire evils & against action against Khire
Yasin II * king of x(good) during Durran Wars* era (*working title)
Captain Bulnir (final) * Khire officer working with Douglas
Arnold * the elite scout/commando guy
Cain * Arnold's son
Other
Arnold & Cains merchant ship is called the Ingold (final)
Dorbriar is no longer above suspision with all the Khire "merchants" & "immigrants" Douglas worried
Anything else need to be known? I could supply a copy of the story so far, PM me. I've add a rough map that I just took 5 minutes in paint to make...
Oh well. If I were to have a map, this would be, roughly, the general layout.