This one is pretty minor at the start of the game.

 

https://imgur.com/a/3J9ttgq

 

'Partyway', I'm sure they meant 'Partway'.

Something weird with the spacing here. The second quotation mark is on a new line for some reason. Fits best in this thread I think.

 

In Gorecci Street you can tell a spirit something along the lines of “My friend here is a priestess of Gaun, she’ll help you” except it’s missing the comma.

It says "round black eyes of Ondra" but in the artwork, they're creamy white.

During the captain speech. Should be "Now" instead of "Not".

In the Temple of Gaun when first encountering High Priestess Saewyn:  

 

In one of the dialogue options, it says: "We're looking for someone. She may have through here years back." I assume it should be may have *been*?

 

Thanks for creating this thread!

Another three-fer:

 

In Degnos's conversation, "at your intently" should be "at you intently".

"under appreciated" should be "underappreciated".

"Speak. Than perish." should be "Speak. Then perish."

I assume this is meant to say "the sword":

 

 

The voice-over says "even though":

 

 

"a" should be "and":

 

 

missing "it":

 

 

missing "be":

 

 

"froms" should be "from":

 

 

missing possessive:

 

Two-Eyed Pim descriptive text error in conversation: "He rolls his neck on his head as if..." (should be head on his neck)

"His room's is a mess." --> "His room is a mess" (or the the short one ofc, but not both)

 

"her" should be removed:

 

 

"Cut their bonds" shouldn't be written differently in these two lines:

 

 

 

Missing space before the hyphen:

 

 

 

"Reminding" should be "reminds":

 

 

 

"Other" should be "others":

 

 

 

"Corpes" should be "corpses":

 

 

 

"makes clear" should be "makes it clear":

 

"Dissonante" should be "dissonant" unless you wanted a random Italian word in your English text

 

 

Missing "s" in "possessed":

 

 

Missing space after the ellipsis:

 

 

The voice-over doesn't say "the":

 

"brigantine" is a ship. The armor is "brigandine".

One of the fighter abilities reads Conquerer instead of Conqueror

1st image: "your" --> "you"

 

 

2nd image: Not really a spelling mistake as such, but an outdated description for Soulbound weapons. There is mention of weapon specialisation such as Ruffian, which was part of the first game but not the second. Maybe more bits are incorrect too.

 

"...might have one been..." to "...might have once been..." 

Should have a closing (") quote after ...to the family? and since it's descriptive text, Martino raises his eyebrow. should be in all gray instead, if I'm not mistaken.

Talking to Xoti in Ukaizo:

 

 

 

 

Magran is misspelled as Magan.

1. "effots" --> "efforts"

 

2. "aroud" --> "around

 

3. "a folded arms" --> probably remove the "a". Needs a rewrite in any case

subjunctive and comma: "if earning the trust of the Wahaki were easy, I would" instead of "was easy I would" (voiceover also makes the mistake)

 

"lenient" not "leniant"

Edited May 23, 20187 yr by rone

"half-moon spectacles" but the artwork shows full spectacles.

Incorrect spelling: "souvenier". Should be "souvenir".

Please review the entirety of the final conversation that the Watcher has with the gods before going to Ukaizo. There are quite a number of discrepancies where what is said by the narrator is not written in the text. Most of it is often stuff like "She says" or "Wael says" with some parts missing more elaborate short phrases. There is also one text frame where the narrator says both text paragraphs but in the reverse order. When I encountered it, I started to keep track but there were so many instances of the missing text that I stopped.
 
Edit: I went back through it a second time and have 28 instances of the missing text. There are probably more since I didn't go through all the different conversation options.

Edited May 26, 20187 yr by Astrolabe

NPC Weto in Sayuka gives me *missing string 66* on conversation attempts