The first time you get to talk with Arkemyr, he talks about the Deadfire... not the "Deadfure", like in your answer, I assume. :D

 

I assume this should be "of":

 

 

I believe "up-front" should be hyphenated:

 

 

The voice-over for this sentence is actually a question ending in ", no?"

 

 

The voice over for this sentence correctly puts "for" at the end of the question:

 

 

I believe this should be "settle on you":

 

Typo in the Shadowed Vale

 

 

Edit: There's actually another little goof.

 

Edited May 17, 20187 yr by Godless

"You" should be "Your":

 

 

 

The voice over doesn't say "and." You could remove "and" and replace the comma with a semicolon to match the sound file:

 

1. "her up lantern" --> "up her lantern". Or alternatively "snatches her lantern up". Depends a bit what you meant. Maybe the latter.
2. I think there should be a comma after the first "brighter"
3. "shoud" --> "should"

 

Edited May 17, 20187 yr by PangaeaACDC

The Light Armor "Fleshmender," the first sentence in the description says "cured dear leather" rather than "deer."

Greetings!

 

Thanks for bringing this to our attention! Ill get this typo bugged for fixing.

 

Best,

 

-Caleb

"been" here doesn't look right. Probably better to remove it, so people don't get fuzzy about the sentence meaning.

 

1. "any takes" --> "take any"

Presumably you mean he's talking faster and faster, in which case: "next" --> "last"

"reminding" --> "reminds"

From the bestiary:

 

Not entirely sure but I think it should read

 

"The xaurip's regalia tells you it must have been an important figure in the tribe - ..." instead.

 

The dialogue in question is triggered when deciding to free "Mother Sharp-Rock" from the cage in the Cavern of Xaur Tuk-Tuk or not.

 

Wizard - Ghost Blades "and hobbled to enemies in the area of effect" instead of "a hobbling enemies..."

 

 

 

Edited May 18, 20187 yr by _teknikz

well when u are leveling up the character and you hover the mouse over the great sword. the little box shows the name of the mace ability

 

and one more thing that really should be changed. if u move on of the character portraits up a little bit u can move it around to change its position. this is a bad idea you should only be able to drag because most of the time i only press on the picture to simply select a single character but the pictures moves up by a tiny bit and i have to organize the pictures again. just leave it to dragging

Another small hick-up. "a the" where "a" should probably be removed (or alternatively use "at").

 

Edited May 18, 20187 yr by PangaeaACDC

After He Walks in Fire:

 

 

Should say "a point", not "an point".

When conversing with Maia after she returns to your party for her vision quest, the first option in your replies is "Why don't you start from the begnning." instead of "beginning."

Should be either "sounds those" or "sound that":

 

 

Missing third period in the ellipsis:

 

 

Should be "capital":

 

 

The voice-over says "gains":

 

 

Should be "put you through", not "put your through":

 

 

Missing comma after "Well":

 

 

Missing space after the ellipsis:

 

 

This comma is separating the subject from its verb—either remove it or add one after "the trader":

 

 

Should be "vertebrae" without the extra "t":

 

 

"You show you him" should be "you show him":

 

 

Missing "are":

 

 

The voice-over says "swim":

 

 

"what" should be "who":

 

"one's" should be "ones" without an apostrophe:

 

The Cyclopedia entry of Damage Types has the „Stash“ as subtype. But is missing the „Slash“ subtype.

Eliminating blow. The tooltip contradicts inself: first it mentions "shaken" and then "frightened".

Three-fer:

 

"appraised" instead of "apprised" (unfortunately, the voice-over also makes this mistake)

"belive" instead of "believe"

"bares" instead of "bears"

Missing "of":

 

 

"not" should be "no"; "of" should be "on":

 

 

Extra "on his" should be removed:

 

Missing punctuation in the journal entry for the "All Aboard" task

Missing "with":

 

Extra "in" should be removed:

 

 

"Fee" should be "feet":