I don't like the UI mock much -- too much like IWD-2. The red/blue bars also look out of place and make the character portraits appear rather square.
I'd like to see character portraits larger and on the left vertically stacked, use the red background effect from BG II / IWD for 'health' or its equivalent. If you're going to have bars (and a need to measure multiple things which would preclude the red-shaded health effect) at least give the bars the physicality of the rest of the UI. Even if you keep the horizontal thing going, make character portraits larger and the gages more 'physical.' The action buttons for spells and such are also slightly too small.
The texture, color, and atmosphere of the UI are fine. It's the functional details, positioning, and sizes that feel off for the most part.
This is actually the first update/proposed/draft of anything that I'm not much of a fan of at all.
PS: Though I do like the 'scripted sequences page' or overlay or whatnot.
Edited by khango, 29 May 2013 - 09:23 AM.