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The opening sentence here looks a bit weird.

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This is more of a stylistic issue. At no point in the sentence is Bethwl identified. Taking this conversation node in isolation, the only way to know "her" is Bethwl is by looking at the label. I don't think any other piece of dialogue in the game works like this.

 

It should be something like "Fur bristles along the anamenfath's arms", IMO.

Edited by Infinitron

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  • "Was" should be "were". Screenshot

  • "A" should be removed; "an" is correct and should remain. Screenshot

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

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This head has an incorrect description. Naroc the Prophet is the Glanfathan from Cilant Lis.

Edited by Infinitron

Sanitarium Head Warden: empty line between 4 and 5.

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Edited by Suen

I've come to burn your kingdom down

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"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

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  • "savanna" should be "savannah" according to the lore. Screenshot

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

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  • "as you soon as" should be "as soon as". Screenshot

  • The comma after "he nods" makes no sense. Screenshot

"between the keep and I." should be "between the keep and me." (really, "I" used as an object is beyond ungrammatical.) Screenshot

Edited by AndreaColombo

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

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  • "either you, or I" should be "either you, or me." Screenshot

  • "weapons rack" should be "weapons' rack" (missing apostrophe.) Screenshot

"the sound" being the subject, the verb should be "is" rather than "are". Screenshot

"records clerk" should be "records' clerk" Screenshot

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

I hope this is the right thread. I spotted a couple of gender errors when the PC is addressed (my character is a female Elf):

 

 

When talking to Kolsc after seeing Raedric, link

 

When a distant relative of Gramrfel the Wayfarer comes to seek his release, link

 

Client version is 2.01 (WM installed)

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  • The comma highlighted should be removed (it serves no purpose and is ungrammatical.) Screenshot
  • "Between she and I" makes no sense and is highly ungrammatical; "she" and "I" are subjects and can't be used as objects. "Between her and me" is the correct form. Screenshot
  • "forgive me saying so" should be "forgive my saying so" Screenshot
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In the last screenshot, two correct uses of the comma have been joined in an incorrect mix :) The correct form is either one of the following two:

 

  • Her eyes shine, and for an instant she looks like a much younger woman.
  • Her eyes shine and, for an instant, she looks like a much younger woman.

 

EDIT: A few more.

 

  • "return" should be "returned" Screenshot
  • Sentence begins with a space that needs removing. Screenshot
  • "fully articulated" should not be hyphenated (composite adjectives that include an adverb never hyphenate.) Screenshot
  • "Might fine" should be "Mighty fine" Screenshot

Edited by AndreaColombo

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

I created a top-level post for this, but by suggestion I'm also reporting it here.

 

There is a minor text error in the soul history of Oleg Shimanovsky in the Copperlane distict of Defiance Bay (just west of the Scrivener's Dormitory).

 

The third paragraph reads "The outer door is bursts open with […]."

 

I believe the "is" should be removed, as it's ungrammatical & seems to be an editing error. (There are other ways to fix that sentence, but dropping the "is" is almost certainly what was intended and it's the fix that's most consistent with the tone, tense and flow of the rest of the text.)

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  • Missing "is" ("it as" should be "it is as") Screenshot

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

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The sentence underlined has inconsistent verb tenses. Based on the context, it should be "If they noticed me [...] we'd be overrun." Screenshot

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

Should be all caught up now for 2.03. Thanks for all the work. A few I left unchanged because the error is "by design" or in some cases excusable because it's part of natural speech. A swift, by the way, is a bird. I had to look it up.  :)

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Thank you, Eric!

 

Could you name a few errors that are by design, that we may stop reporting them?

 

I sure hope "I" used as an object isn't part of those: It really drives me up the wall :biggrin:

 

 

EDIT: a few more while we're at it

 

  • Missing comma after "room" to close the aside Screenshot
  • Missing "the" (reads, "but way leads down"; should be, "but the way leads down") Screenshot
  • The sentence underlined shows up twice (I suggest removing the second one, since it's shorter.) Screenshot

Edited by AndreaColombo

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

  • 2 weeks later...
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  • Pretty sure "Stamina" should be "Endurance" Screenshot

  • Subject being singular, the verb should be "feels" Screenshot

The correct name is "Krivi" without an "s" Screenshot

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

  • 2 months later...

data_expansion1/localized/en/text/conversations/px1_00_stalwart_village/px1_00_renengild.stringtable

ID 255 "Steel is steel. It may be light and it may take an edge well, but per complanca, the legends grow with each passing year."

 

What the heck is „per complanca“? Google finds nothing. Just checked all translations, only french has there something other, but my level of french is not enough to understand this. All other translations have it left unchanged, even russian.

 

 

*edit*

data_expansion1/localized/en/text/conversations/px1_02_durgans_battery/px1_02_si_chasm_rescue.stringtable

ID 84: Random Node 84

 

Artefact? Or just missing?

 

*edit 2*

There are a many more of them. Try a grep for „Node“.

Edited by Xaratas

  • 3 weeks later...

data_expansion1/localized/en/text/conversations/px1_00_stalwart_village/px1_00_renengild.stringtable

ID 255

 

Seems to be deleted in Patch 3.0 Beta

  • 2 weeks later...

data\conversations\01_defiance_bay_copperlane\01_cv_lumdala.stringtable:52

"Autographs after the performance, please. Great art requires great concentration, and greatness is expected from the Revel of the Stars."

 

Should the 'the' be removed ? Every other occurences in the game are 'the Revel of Stars'.

French localizations here.

French localization thread here.

 

data\conversations\px2_08_yenwood\px2_08_cv_chancellor.stringtable:23

 

"My apologies, but you these are dire times. Our business must wait until these riots have ceased, milady!"

 

'you' should be removed (the male version was corrected in the last patch but not the female version).

French localizations here.

French localization thread here.

 

  • 3 weeks later...
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  • "has issue" should be "has issued" - Screenshot
  • "was was" should be "we were" (unless it was deliberate because I guess the dude's education's kinda lacking anyway?) - Screenshot

 

Eric, I noticed you didn't fix instances of "I" used as an object—why, oh why? Is it to reflect the fact that many people use it like that despite its being ungrammatical?

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

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"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

Patch 3.0.1 is such a mess... At least the german and english text are a mix of bug fixes and regressions. Some text entries contain fixes and other errors. Seems there are old text files mixed with newer ones...

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Typo in Aegis of Loyalty description reported here ("severed" should be "severe")

"Time is not your enemy. Forever is."

— Fall-From-Grace, Planescape: Torment

"It's the questions we can't answer that teach us the most. They teach us how to think. If you give a man an answer, all he gains is a little fact. But give him a question, and he'll look for his own answers."

— Kvothe, The Wise Man's Fears

My Deadfire mods: Brilliant Mod | Faster Deadfire | Deadfire Unnerfed | Helwalker Rekke | Permanent Per-Rest Bonuses | PoE Items for Deadfire | No Recyled Icons | Soul Charged Nautilus

 

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