The written lines do not match the voice over, Pallegina says: "They assumed I would die. I did not.":

 

 

 

"It was not enough to make me fully Calbandra,..."

 

 

Pallegina in general does not seem to use abbreviations in this regard at all.

 

Another Pallegina contraction that does not exist in the voiceover: "... was not in my orders."

"Trigger_Script_VTC_Addendum"

 

I'm not sure what word was meant here, but "pliant" means "flexible". "recumbent" or "supine", maybe?

 

It still says 'pliant'.

Explosives skill description (in level-up interface):

 

 

 

The Explosives improves the accuracy, damage and effectiveness of bombs, noisemakers, and similar devices.

 

1)  Either drop the "The" or add "skill" after "Explosives".

 

2)  Inconsistent use of the Oxford Comma.  Either add a comma after "damage" or delete the one after "noisemakers", depending on what the in-house style preference is.  (But count on my stern disapproval if the option is removal.)

Edited October 28, 20187 yr by Enoch

If they add a comma after “damage, they’ve gotta drop the “and.” It reads to me like “damage and effectiveness” are meant to be grouped together and form one item of the list.

1) comma: "... the Colligia me Definsia Mutio, a prestigious..."

 

2) comma: "I hide nothing, you bloated puffer fish!"

 

"Trigger_Script_VTC_Addendum"

 

I'm not sure what word was meant here, but "pliant" means "flexible". "recumbent" or "supine", maybe?

 

It still says 'pliant'.

 

 

It indirectly implies the Huana is willing and not resistant. It makes sense.

Edited October 28, 20187 yr by Rolandur

 

 

"Trigger_Script_VTC_Addendum"

 

I'm not sure what word was meant here, but "pliant" means "flexible". "recumbent" or "supine", maybe?

 

It still says 'pliant'.

 

 

It indirectly implies the Huana is willing and not resistant. It makes sense.

 

 

You're thinking of 'compliant'.

Option 2 is in brackets instead of quotes.

The expression is either "licking its chops" or "whetting its appetite"... this is just weird.

Dear devs, here are a few more typos and oddities for you (see attached images).

 

Information on what's incorrect and suggested corrections are provided in each photo. 

 

Cheers, 

 

Ilya

 

In Serafen's reputation list, "*Missing string 8*"

 

In this section, Pietro is named Iron Gut, but that's the name of the quest.

In Serafen's reputation list, "*Missing string 8*"

 

In this section, Pietro is named Iron Gut, but that's the name of the quest.

 

Heh, my initial response to reading that was to wonder just what sort of amazing guitar did Serafen play that it had *eight* strings?!

Missing article: "It's a notoriously perilous chain of volcanoes."

Missing article: "It's a notoriously perilous chain of volcanoes."

 

"Now they tell us!"

found some more:

 

 

 

(these place = this place, street tough = (probably) street thug.

Edited November 10, 20187 yr by RuralBuddha

1) voiceover says "swim" not "crawl"

 

2) Ori o Koīki and Crookspur are in the northwest, but they show up here in the Northeast section

1. missing comma after 'archipelago'

voice-over says 'speciality' not 'specialty'

"Missing string 7" appeared right before the "Missing string 24"

Upon completion of "A Matter of Import", speaking to Fleet Master Okaya as she's giving you the next quest "Overgrowth". The line "You may have noticed the outsize coral in the harbor" should replace "outsize" with "outsized", as the voiceover says the latter.

Throughout this interaction, my Watcher was gendered correctly as female, except here.  Also, there's a comma missing after "never you worry".

Edited November 21, 20187 yr by rone

"the human with bent to a scowl" doesn't make any sense. Also, if they're hooded, how do you know they're scowling?

misspelled 'Glamfellen'

'waver', not 'waiver'

a) "I won't plead for mercy."

b) "a motion you had seen repeated"

VO says "I swear" instead of "I tell ya":

 

 

 

Extra "will":

 

At the end of the quest "The Man of Chimes", while speaking to Captain Tatzatl, his first philosophical question begins with "A woman is with child" when it should be "A woman is with *a* child", as per the voiceover.