I think it came out really well. But the ears are still a bit off (too big and pointy?). There was another "revision of revision" in this thread where ears were done just right (not the face though, here you've done far better job), imo - https://i.imgur.com/kCds4Bz.png If you could make similar changes to your revision, that would be awesome.
Ah, I didn't even think to consider the ears! They just flew over my head I guess. Thank you for pointing them out! Here you go:
I simply pasted the ears from the other portrait onto my own; a very easy fix. Hope that doesn't count as cheating or something haha.
Great work! Would I suggest maybe recovering the red banner on her armour?
Oh, I think I meant to do that originally, but I forgot. Again, a very simple fix:
That does add a nice pop of color, doesn't it? If anyone has any other qualms or suggestions let me know, I'd be happy to oblige.