Darth Launch

I can't remember being that age... so long ago... *peers into the horizon* I like the cut of this 'sexgod' kid's jib... who knows he might just be a sexgod... *adds kid to MSN messenger list*... " DL P.S.

I guessing that your little comment about current day politics was about Bsh, but I could be way off, so correct me if I'm wrong Your writing is most definitely improving, despite it being supposedly unfinished I really enjoyed it There really isnt anything that I can criticise about the chapter apart from your teasing at the end with 'TO BE CONTINUED'... Gah!... How I hate those three words!... I eagerly await your new stuff DL

Have you tried loading a saved game then? DL

Quite possibly screwed... have you tried manually downloading the patch from the LucasArts website? Might be worth a try... Also, have you tried loading from a saved game from before the cut scene of Kreia and Sion? Not sure what else to suggest kid, sorry... Hope it works out for you, good luck DL

You're totally spoiling me Arch... yes it is indeed snazzy I didnt find this chapter particularly cliched, I think you handled it pretty well in fact... the thing that got me about the temple thing was if they truly thought that Karn was such a lowly lifeform and a cursed child then surely he would be deemed as unworthy of being a sacrifice... meh, it was still cool :cool: My heart totally goes out for Sam... that poor girl... how she loves Karn... *gushes* Could I request that you dont use the word 'secreted' again?... I think you've used it a couple of times and although you dont mean it that way, I always get images of gooey fluids... " *ahem*... moving on swiftly... I found it weird that Bal had learnt so much about their customs and stuff so quickly... but I suppose he'd be a fast learner *shrugs* On the whole, another super chapter Arch Can't wait to read your next chapter (please don't ask for my ideas on your later chapters as I'm creatively challenged and would end up ruining your work - in fact I'm surprised you haven't asked me to stop commenting yet)... DL P.S. @ 'bigboom' :D

I totally didnt mean it that way Arch! Honest! I just meant it in a general way DL

Well, I thought it did too Kaftan, but I've discovered what its meant to mean... look here DL P.S. Now listening to 'Hella Good' by No Doubt

Useless Information: I've discovered that Gwen Stefani uses the term 'Hollaback Girl' in the sense that she's not the type of girl to fight back verbally, but in fact the type to fight back physically... Good for her DL P.S. Mmm... Greek yoghurt with honey... *drool*

Am listening to No Doubt's 'Don't Speak'... absolute classic! Tis a shame what that sweet Stefani girl has done to herself now... I mean what the hell is a Hollaback Girl or whatever she calls it... *mumbles* DL

I say kill them... They taste so nice with a little tabasco sauce drizzled on them DL

Hell, I'd read anything... I'm one of those people that has to be reading something or otherwise I'd go insane... *whispers* I've even been so close to the edge that I've actually read psychology text books before today... :ph34r: DL

I definitely believe in democracy but unfortunately very few countries/nations actually put it into practice and therefore despite calling themselves a democratic country are far from it... I believe that we all have the same rights as at the end of the day we're all human and are capable of the same amount of goodness and cruelty... no one is perfect... so we all have the right to vote... Well, thats my two cents DL

Nice work Awz... although you've yet to post more chapters etc... Its a good start I like your short chapters, sometimes long ones are long for the wrong reasons... Keep writing and posting kid DL P.S. I will no way compare your writing with Arch's or vice versa, as I refuse to incur the wrath of either of you

Well, this chapter wasnt that bad... It had to be written to explain why Vikor's ship was fired upon etc... It was good that it had some dark undertones to it... like how Bram's attitude to the whole situation was so icy and detached and how he had de-limbed the person who had annoyed him... Keep fighting the good fight Arch DL

Great pic kemis Youre disgustingly talented <_< Keep fighting the good fight DL

Beautiful pic Saraya... DL likes :D *hands over the first of a fresh batch of homemade cookies* I really like the way you did the shading on the outfit... looks very artistic! Keep making me proud DL

I refuse to apologise for squealing jaguars4ever DL P.S. You're welcome for the cookies Zulu :cool: P.P.S. I dont think there was anything wrong with his face per se... I mean its an action pic for crying out loud!

Clint Eastwood's still alive?! Sure didnt look that way at the Oscars... " DL P.S. Useless Information: Ermm... I found my old The Verve album Urban Hymns :D

I suppose Michael Owen might be more suited to a Women's team... Well, since my brother's now married I can't imagine him trying to impress anyone... and he can't be truly interested in women's football after he realised that we don't allow guests in the shower rooms... he's obviously doing this to me to be evil and cruel... *sigh* I just really want to go... I haven't actually been to the City of Manchester Stadium yet either... DL P.S. Mr. Metadigital, if you seriously don't know why I'm congratulating Michael Owen, might I direct your attention here

Ok, how rude is this?! My brother's got tickets to watch the Women's European Championship opening match of England v. Finland (not sure how he got them) and he won't take me! RUDE! DL P.S. Congratulations to Michael Owen

:"> I'm glad you liked the pic Draken :D Thanks for all the cookies DL P.S. Please tell me you weren't asking for more pics off me, because to be honest I'm not sure I can handle the emotional strain...

Oh Arch! This chapter was totally awesome! Much awesomeness indeed! I didn't see the whole Karn-becoming-the-next-Prince thing at all... very cool You're right about the interaction between Karn, Sam and Obiji at the end... would Sam really jump on Karn and kiss him like that in front of her dad? Also, that little paragraph at the end about Bal following his new master seemed a little rushed, like you had just remembered to that you should mention it or something... Despite those two ickle issues, that was a super chapter! Great work Arch DL P.S. Honest, your writing is not bad for a kid

Awesome pic Zulu! I haven't seen a Carth pic in ages... *fangirl squeal* *two cookies for you* DL P.S. Yes, yes, complain all you want about my squealing, I aint gonna change it!

I'm listening to The Mission soundtrack by the truly fantastic Ennio Morricone DL