Phew...
Finally got through the second chapter without banging my head against the wall repeatedly and wanting to scratch my eyes out...
I actually really enjoyed the second chapter a lot more than the first or the prelude... you've written Sam and Karn quite well
I agree with Mr Metadigital about the twins' names, but I suppose parents tend to name twins quite similarly (I know quite a few twins) so that's not a major flaw in your story in any way...
Right, am going to read the third chapter now... :cool:
DL
EDIT - Okay, just finished the third chapter...
I'm finding this story really growing on me now... I love the way you've written Karn, Sam and Obiji and their relationships between each other
I'm glad you made Karn's powers subside once again... the whole it-just-was-a-matter-of-doing-something-simple-to-make-you-uber-powerful thing normally annoys me in stories so I'm glad that his powers are once again dormant
Can't wait for the next chapter Arch