Hurlshort Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 The male restroom is a tricky place. Most men have no qualms about relieving themselves in even the dirtiest of bathrooms. Urination is handled quickly and with little precision. The average male will make a casual attempt at hitting the urinal and be on his merry way. If no bathroom is present, any dark corner will do. The problem with this casual spraying is that the secondary method of relieving oneself becomes trickier. It is a much more personal experience to place one
Cantousent Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 Haha Bravo! Fionavar's Holliday Wishes to all members of our online community: Happy Holidays Join the revelry at the Obsidian Plays channel:Obsidian Plays Remembering tarna, Phosphor, Metadigital, and Visceris. Drink mead heartily in the halls of Valhalla, my friends!
seejai Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 wow. that was interesting (well written tho!) "She was short, she was furry, she was loud, and she was determined to sell him a melon"- random passage from Spector of the Past by Timothy Zahn
Blank Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 (edited) True and funny. Funny because it was so true. You also created a sense of suspense, which makes the story even funnier in retrospect, because you get the reader to feel like they also desperately need to take a dookie. Edited July 31, 2006 by Blank
LadyCrimson Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 Funny and true. “Things are as they are. Looking out into the universe at night, we make no comparisons between right and wrong stars, nor between well and badly arranged constellations.” – Alan Watts
Fionavar Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 Though I am indeed grateful for such sharing and inspiration, the Obsidian fora are not geared toward fanfic. There are indeed many fan fora that can accommodate such creative sharings. Until then ... know that there is much gratitude for this sharing. F The universe is change; your life is what our thoughts make it - Marcus Aurelius (161)
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