Jedi Valius Posted March 30, 2005 Posted March 30, 2005 Well I've seen all the sketches by people on these forums so i had a go too. Can some people (especially the good artists) if it is ok or not and what can be improved... Thanks This is meant to the Exile cutting down a Sith Trooper, i guess on Onderon during the rebellion of Vuklu and his traitors. Its a bit screwed up around the edges cuz my scanner is kinda crap... <_<
Kor Qel Droma Posted March 30, 2005 Posted March 30, 2005 You just need to rework the eyes Jaguars4ever is still alive. No word of a lie.
Kaftan Barlast Posted March 30, 2005 Posted March 30, 2005 http://www.drawright.com/ They say it works. DISCLAIMER: Do not take what I write seriously unless it is clearly and in no uncertain terms, declared by me to be meant in a serious and non-humoristic manner. If there is no clear indication, asume the post is written in jest. This notification is meant very seriously and its purpouse is to avoid misunderstandings and the consequences thereof. Furthermore; I can not be held accountable for anything I write on these forums since the idea of taking serious responsability for my unserious actions, is an oxymoron in itself. Important: as the following sentence contains many naughty words I warn you not to read it under any circumstances; botty, knickers, wee, erogenous zone, psychiatrist, clitoris, stockings, bosom, poetry reading, dentist, fellatio and the department of agriculture. "I suppose outright stupidity and complete lack of taste could also be considered points of view. "
Rosbjerg Posted March 30, 2005 Posted March 30, 2005 they said the same thing about prozac .. Fortune favors the bald.
Ohma Posted March 30, 2005 Posted March 30, 2005 Guys, that's mean. Valius, you actually seem to have done pretty well. The only things that don't seem quite right are the placement of Exile's eyes, and the width of the Sith trooper's torso. Other than that you've done quite well. Just keep at it.
Jedi Valius Posted March 31, 2005 Author Posted March 31, 2005 lol rite. Thanks...ill see if i can edit those. Ill get it right eventually.
ShadowPaladin V1.0 Posted March 31, 2005 Posted March 31, 2005 How to draw comics the Marvel way is a good read. I have to agree with Volourn. Bioware is pretty much dead now. Deals like this kills development studios. 478327[/snapback]
darth spock Posted March 31, 2005 Posted March 31, 2005 GAAAAAAAAAH! "Drawing From the Right Side of the Brain" is the **** they use in my art class.... the only thing I've learned from that class is that pure contour drawings = hell, grid drawings are from Satan, and you can never have too many drawing erasers. Hm, and looking at yours reminds me of mine. Except mine is worse. (Atton looks a bit high). Fanfics: KotOR II: After the Credits Rolled: Read Force Sight: Read Other: Gaming Blog: Read
Jedi Valius Posted March 31, 2005 Author Posted March 31, 2005 Right! Must refer to someone else's art to get the eyes! Can't get the damn things in the right place... Should refer to somewhere like Aimo's Galactic Theatre i suppose... Thanks for some of the 'useful' comments
Starbreeze Posted March 31, 2005 Posted March 31, 2005 Try the EGG method. 1. Draw one egg upside down. 2. Draw a cross in the middle. ( If viewed from front) 3. Draw the eyes (horizontal) and nose(vertical) at the lines. You probably have seen this in books... Good Luck!
Jedi Valius Posted March 31, 2005 Author Posted March 31, 2005 Completely unrelated to Star Wars as such, but another attempt at doing faces... Not sure if this is very different face-wise.... Don't suppose the word 'daemonhunter' means anything to anyone?
Tsel Posted March 31, 2005 Posted March 31, 2005 One thing to keep in mind, when your drawing medium is pencil, is don
Jedi Valius Posted March 31, 2005 Author Posted March 31, 2005 Whoa! There are that many types of rubber?! I just used a normal rubber for erasing mistakes. O well. I'll have a look into those types...
witchzenka Posted March 31, 2005 Posted March 31, 2005 You have a good eye for detail! And your proportions seem good too. -Zenka The Evil Cow http://kotorsocial.suddenlaunch3.com/index.cgi
Vashanti Posted March 31, 2005 Posted March 31, 2005 Good start. This book helped me a lot when I was starting out (and it helped the guys from "Homestarrunner.com!") http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/067...4374470-6874337
Tsel Posted March 31, 2005 Posted March 31, 2005 Oh, and whatever you do, never touch the drawing surface of your paper with your bare hands. The very edge of the paper is okay, but never the drawing surface itself. The reason being is your skin is loaded with oil. That oil will cause your pencil to slightly smear on the papers surface. If you need to wipe drawing debris from your drawing surface use a tissue, a soft drafting brush, or a simple house painting paint brush. Also, use another piece of paper on top of your drawing, to rest your hand or arm on, so you don't touch your drawing while drawing. Keep the faith and good luck You're doing good Tsel
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