Hmm...
It was an interesting chapter... I think you overuse a lot of "technical" words though... I dont think all of them are actually necessary for the story... kinda confused me at one point...
Also, is this Prince Vikor dude going to be your main character?... I know its not always essential for main characters to actually be likeable but his self absorption is something thats not too interesting to read...
I found his shape-shifting moment a little unnecessary too... simulating to eat that dude? Huh?...
Apart from that it was a good chapter
I liked what little you wrote about Belyara Eller, she seems interesting and a bit more realistic too with what little you wrote of her as does Bal
Like I said before, I'm more than happy to continue reading your story and making silly comments if thats what you'd want :D
DL