OMG! THOSE SCREENZ R SO ROXORZ!!!!
no really...what was that? you should use something better than paint, and try to make the colors seem more, how should i explain.... the whole blue bastila thing isnt working at all.....
and you should learn to model at least a little better before you make a mod. the city you made isnt a city at all, its more like a.... i dont know yet.
maybe buy photoshop or find a nice program like coral, which should be cheap by now, and start over. your 'new malak' is just the guy on the front page, show the actual malak reskin.
the guy at the bottom of the page isnt too good, you shouldnt even add it. the only good thing i see are the kath hound reskin and the leviathan reskin, but who likes that turret agme anyway? and their only reskins, you cant take a reskin pack and call it a mod. why not try to create player models to make it a little more interesting instead of seeing the same ones with facepaint.
you did almost nothing with the malak (the one on the ender spire), just painted his face.
everything that you made was reused form the first one, except for your city, which the city sort of sucks (no offence, and i know your just starting it so dont get upset). but you should have been able to do more in 6 months.
im not flaming you, these are just suggestions