Jasiek Posted December 8, 2012 Share Posted December 8, 2012 Hi, I know I will probably be ignored, mostly because this is my second/third post here, but I would like to ask you some help: I am an journalist-in-learning (a university in Poland, a field of study called "Journalism and social communication") and I created a blog in which I will write in english about games and anything gamish in nature. I would ask for help in two ways: 1) Just come in time to time and give me some constructive feedback on what and how I wrote. Also, comment on my english, it's not my main language, as you can see. 2) Give me some ideas on future articles. Because after writing a sort selection of indie games, and a review of Baldur's Gate: Enchanted Edition I will be out of them... :/ Any help will be very much appreciated. The address of the blog is http://gamingbyyeti.blogspot.com/ Pretty please, I will give you a cookie for help (or some leftover steam keys the next time I will have some :< ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melkathi Posted December 8, 2012 Share Posted December 8, 2012 That's a cute avatar Your english is fine. There were two tiny mistakes in the text and no typos. Or there were two typos and no mistakes. So don't worry ("an critically acclaimed game" should be "a critically acclaimed game", though you do a and an correclty the whole rest of the blog. Money is singular. So instead of those money it should be this money) Personally I would have changed the structure of the sentence: "What we would get and what will we get" to "What we would get and what we will get" though more likely I would say "What we were to get and what we will get". That's just personal style though... I think I can't promise any ideas on future articles 1 Unobtrusively informing you about my new ebook (which you should feel free to read and shower with praise). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 8, 2012 Author Share Posted December 8, 2012 Will fix those typos "soon" After I finish writing the next article. Then I will need to make some screenshots from the games I am writing about But still, thanks for the quick feedback :D Here, have a cookie :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melkathi Posted December 8, 2012 Share Posted December 8, 2012 Thanks *nomnom* Going to wait to see what games you write about. Unobtrusively informing you about my new ebook (which you should feel free to read and shower with praise). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 8, 2012 Author Share Posted December 8, 2012 I HAZ UPLOADED IT, FINALLY. I had some major problems with my internet, but still, I SUCCEED :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BruceVC Posted December 8, 2012 Share Posted December 8, 2012 I'll read your blog and give you feedback Also there are several people on these forums who enjoy correcting grammar, like AGX, so hopefully he reads this and then gives you input "Abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is and saw Virtue in her shape how lovely: and pined his loss” John Milton "We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing.” - George Bernard Shaw "What counts in life is not the mere fact that we have lived. It is what difference we have made to the lives of others that will determine the significance of the life we lead" - Nelson Mandela Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 8, 2012 Author Share Posted December 8, 2012 Good to know, thanks for help, really. I just understood that my English has gotten a bit rusty since I last wrote in it D: Any feedback is more than welcome :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 8, 2012 Author Share Posted December 8, 2012 CHANGE OF PLANS, NEXT POST: RAGNAROK ONLINE 2 REVIEW :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 13, 2012 Author Share Posted December 13, 2012 A slight update to my blog has came :D Sorry for the link, but I just got an info that won't be getting any scholarship this year, because my $W%$%^#%# university is poor :/ http://adf.ly/Fvs1n You can always just watch my blog, you will avoid the ads that way... Will do an RO 2 review/first impressions as soon as it will work for me. Until that, I will work on a next indie game spotlight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melkathi Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 Loved this: The Good - it came out Great humour Unobtrusively informing you about my new ebook (which you should feel free to read and shower with praise). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alanschu Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 That's a big ass cookie! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 13, 2012 Author Share Posted December 13, 2012 That's a big ass cookie! Hope it will be delicious too :D Loved this: The Good - it came out Great humour Just mine, will be more things like that later on :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 14, 2012 Author Share Posted December 14, 2012 (edited) Got a question, I need it for my next post: any idea how to make a screenshot on an android phone? something without tampering with thing too much, I won't be using mine ^^''' OH, and btw. I made a page on G+ for my blog, please feel free to subscribe, if you use google plus :D https://plus.google.com/u/0/b/105593234731738899491/105593234731738899491 Edited December 14, 2012 by Jasiek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 15, 2012 Author Share Posted December 15, 2012 Next Indie Spotlight coming soon (when gameplays upload themselves to Youtube) :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorth Posted December 16, 2012 Share Posted December 16, 2012 Looking forward to the next installment I liked the indie presentations. 1 “He who joyfully marches to music in rank and file has already earned my contempt. He has been given a large brain by mistake, since for him the spinal cord would surely suffice.” - Albert Einstein Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 16, 2012 Author Share Posted December 16, 2012 WOAH, thanks for the kind words :D Will do my best :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 16, 2012 Author Share Posted December 16, 2012 OMG, THIS INTERNET IS SO SLOW.... It hasn't uploaded 300mb of gameplays YET D: it will be a long wait D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 16, 2012 Author Share Posted December 16, 2012 AFTER HOURS OF FIGHTING WITH MY PC, IT'S FINALLY HERE :D My pc went nuts, my internet went nuts, even Torchlight 2 was against me, but here it is :D http://gamingbyyeti.blogspot.com/2012/12/yetis-indie-game-spotlight-vol-2.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casa Posted December 16, 2012 Share Posted December 16, 2012 A very popular mistake you see often with these game versions (like the Witcher): It's "Enhanced", not "Enchanted". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 16, 2012 Author Share Posted December 16, 2012 A very popular mistake you see often with these game versions (like the Witcher): It's "Enhanced", not "Enchanted". where, where, where? o.O I can't see it D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casa Posted December 16, 2012 Share Posted December 16, 2012 Baldur's Gate Enchanted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 16, 2012 Author Share Posted December 16, 2012 So much fail... Thanks for noticing XD'''' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 19, 2012 Author Share Posted December 19, 2012 Three things: Thanks for the views, Google shows from what page you come, and this forum rocks in terms of visitors to my blog. YOU ARE AWESOME! In case someone wants to informed of new posts A.S.A.P, then I have made an page for my blog on G+ : https://plus.google.com/105593234731738899491 The next post will be an comparison of two dungeon crawlers, won't be saying more, I don't want to spoil it beforehand :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted December 19, 2012 Author Share Posted December 19, 2012 (edited) VERY FREAKING SPECIAL ANNOUNCEMENT !!!!! DUNGEON DEFENDER + ALL DLC'S CAN BE BOUGHT VERY, VERY CHEAPLY AT HUMBLE INDIE BUNDLE AT THIS MOMENT!!!! THE REVIEW CAN BE READ HERE: http://gamingbyyeti....ight-vol-2.html , THE BUNDLE CAN BE BOUGHT HERE: https://www.humblebundle.com Edited December 19, 2012 by Jasiek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alanschu Posted December 19, 2012 Share Posted December 19, 2012 i actually find it harder to read your post with that highlighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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