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Hi, I know I will probably be ignored, mostly because this is my second/third post here, but I would like to ask you some help: I am an journalist-in-learning (a university in Poland, a field of study called "Journalism and social communication") and I created a blog in which I will write in english about games and anything gamish in nature. I would ask for help in two ways:

1) Just come in time to time and give me some constructive feedback on what and how I wrote. Also, comment on my english, it's not my main language, as you can see.

2) Give me some ideas on future articles. Because after writing a sort selection of indie games, and a review of Baldur's Gate: Enchanted Edition I will be out of them... :/

 

Any help will be very much appreciated. The address of the blog is http://gamingbyyeti.blogspot.com/

 

Pretty please, I will give you a cookie for help (or some leftover steam keys the next time I will have some :< )

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That's a cute avatar :)

Your english is fine. There were two tiny mistakes in the text and no typos. Or there were two typos and no mistakes. So don't worry ;)

("an critically acclaimed game" should be "a critically acclaimed game", though you do a and an correclty the whole rest of the blog. Money is singular. So instead of those money it should be this money)

Personally I would have changed the structure of the sentence: "What we would get and what will we get" to "What we would get and what we will get" though more likely I would say "What we were to get and what we will get". That's just personal style though... I think :)

 

I can't promise any ideas on future articles

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Unobtrusively informing you about my new ebook (which you should feel free to read and shower with praise).

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Will fix those typos "soon" :) After I finish writing the next article. Then I will need to make some screenshots from the games I am writing about :) But still, thanks for the quick feedback :D Here, have a cookie :D

 

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Thanks *nomnom*

Going to wait to see what games you write about.


Unobtrusively informing you about my new ebook (which you should feel free to read and shower with praise).

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I HAZ UPLOADED IT, FINALLY. I had some major problems with my internet, but still, I SUCCEED :D

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I'll read your blog and give you feedback :)

 

Also there are several people on these forums who enjoy correcting grammar, like AGX, so hopefully he reads this and then gives you input


"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing.” -  George Bernard Shaw

 

"What counts in life is not the mere fact that we have lived. It is what difference we have made to the lives of others that will determine the significance of the life we lead" - Nelson Mandela

 

 

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Good to know, thanks for help, really. I just understood that my English has gotten a bit rusty since I last wrote in it D: Any feedback is more than welcome :D

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A slight update to my blog has came :D Sorry for the link, but I just got an info that won't be getting any scholarship this year, because my $W%$%^#%# university is poor :/ http://adf.ly/Fvs1n You can always just watch my blog, you will avoid the ads that way...

 

Will do an RO 2 review/first impressions as soon as it will work for me. Until that, I will work on a next indie game spotlight.

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Loved this:

The Good

- it came out

 

Great humour :)


Unobtrusively informing you about my new ebook (which you should feel free to read and shower with praise).

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That's a big ass cookie!

 

Hope it will be delicious too :D

Loved this:

The Good

- it came out

 

Great humour :)

 

Just mine, will be more things like that later on :D

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Got a question, I need it for my next post: any idea how to make a screenshot on an android phone? something without tampering with thing too much, I won't be using mine ^^'''

 

OH, and btw. I made a page on G+ for my blog, please feel free to subscribe, if you use google plus :D https://plus.google.com/u/0/b/105593234731738899491/105593234731738899491

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Looking forward to the next installment :)

 

I liked the indie presentations.

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“He who joyfully marches to music in rank and file has already earned my contempt. He has been given a large brain by mistake, since for him the spinal cord would surely suffice.” - Albert Einstein

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OMG, THIS INTERNET IS SO SLOW....

 

It hasn't uploaded 300mb of gameplays YET D: it will be a long wait D:

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A very popular mistake you see often with these game versions (like the Witcher): It's "Enhanced", not "Enchanted". ;)

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A very popular mistake you see often with these game versions (like the Witcher): It's "Enhanced", not "Enchanted". ;)

 

where, where, where? o.O I can't see it D:

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Three things:

Thanks for the views, Google shows from what page you come, and this forum rocks in terms of visitors to my blog. YOU ARE AWESOME!

 

In case someone wants to informed of new posts A.S.A.P, then I have made an page for my blog on G+ : https://plus.google.com/105593234731738899491

 

The next post will be an comparison of two dungeon crawlers, won't be saying more, I don't want to spoil it beforehand :D

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