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Hi, I know I will probably be ignored, mostly because this is my second/third post here, but I would like to ask you some help: I am an journalist-in-learning (a university in Poland, a field of study called "Journalism and social communication") and I created a blog in which I will write in english about games and anything gamish in nature. I would ask for help in two ways:
1) Just come in time to time and give me some constructive feedback on what and how I wrote. Also, comment on my english, it's not my main language, as you can see.
2) Give me some ideas on future articles. Because after writing a sort selection of indie games, and a review of Baldur's Gate: Enchanted Edition I will be out of them... :/

Any help will be very much appreciated. The address of the blog is http://gamingbyyeti.blogspot.com/

Pretty please, I will give you a cookie for help (or some leftover steam keys the next time I will have some :< )

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That's a cute avatar :)
Your english is fine. There were two tiny mistakes in the text and no typos. Or there were two typos and no mistakes. So don't worry ;)
("an critically acclaimed game" should be "a critically acclaimed game", though you do a and an correclty the whole rest of the blog. Money is singular. So instead of those money it should be this money)
Personally I would have changed the structure of the sentence: "What we would get and what will we get" to "What we would get and what we will get" though more likely I would say "What we were to get and what we will get". That's just personal style though... I think :)

I can't promise any ideas on future articles
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Will fix those typos "soon" :) After I finish writing the next article. Then I will need to make some screenshots from the games I am writing about :) But still, thanks for the quick feedback :D Here, have a cookie :D

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Thanks *nomnom*
Going to wait to see what games you write about.

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I HAZ UPLOADED IT, FINALLY. I had some major problems with my internet, but still, I SUCCEED :D

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I'll read your blog and give you feedback :)

Also there are several people on these forums who enjoy correcting grammar, like AGX, so hopefully he reads this and then gives you input

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Good to know, thanks for help, really. I just understood that my English has gotten a bit rusty since I last wrote in it D: Any feedback is more than welcome :D

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CHANGE OF PLANS, NEXT POST: RAGNAROK ONLINE 2 REVIEW :D

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A slight update to my blog has came :D Sorry for the link, but I just got an info that won't be getting any scholarship this year, because my $W%$%^#%# university is poor :/ http://adf.ly/Fvs1n You can always just watch my blog, you will avoid the ads that way...

Will do an RO 2 review/first impressions as soon as it will work for me. Until that, I will work on a next indie game spotlight.

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Loved this:
The Good
- it came out

Great humour :)

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That's a big ass cookie!

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That's a big ass cookie!


Hope it will be delicious too :D

Loved this:
The Good
- it came out

Great humour :)


Just mine, will be more things like that later on :D

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Got a question, I need it for my next post: any idea how to make a screenshot on an android phone? something without tampering with thing too much, I won't be using mine ^^'''

OH, and btw. I made a page on G+ for my blog, please feel free to subscribe, if you use google plus :D https://plus.google....234731738899491

Edited by Jasiek, 14 December 2012 - 02:50 PM.


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Next Indie Spotlight coming soon (when gameplays upload themselves to Youtube) :D

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Looking forward to the next installment :)

I liked the indie presentations.
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WOAH, thanks for the kind words :D Will do my best :D

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OMG, THIS INTERNET IS SO SLOW....

It hasn't uploaded 300mb of gameplays YET D: it will be a long wait D:

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AFTER HOURS OF FIGHTING WITH MY PC, IT'S FINALLY HERE :D My pc went nuts, my internet went nuts, even Torchlight 2 was against me, but here it is :D

http://gamingbyyeti....ight-vol-2.html

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A very popular mistake you see often with these game versions (like the Witcher): It's "Enhanced", not "Enchanted". ;)

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A very popular mistake you see often with these game versions (like the Witcher): It's "Enhanced", not "Enchanted". ;)


where, where, where? o.O I can't see it D:





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