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(w00t) I'm just pimping my book of poetry ... which should be available soon

 

Here is the link if anyony is interested ... just keep watching, I'll repost when it is finally available for sale.

 

http://www.authorhouse.com/BookStore/ItemD...okid~33232.aspx

 

sample poem

 

Calling Mr. Moonlight

 

See here Mr. Moonlight

Please shine some of your magic on me

King of the skies, the ruler of night

Grant me just one little fantasy

 

Bring me the princess of dream

The divine creature of love

Let me hold her in my heart's ravine

For she is apart of the heaven's above

 

Dear Mr. Moonlight ... hear my call

Listen to this wishing buffoon

I watched it happen, the star that falls

And I know she's coming to me soon

 

She has such a celestial body

That you have to know her name

Call upon your powers of lunacy

And let us ride on through the flame

 

Help her meet me under your spell

The sun's too hot to look into it's eyes

But beneath your light I know I can tell

If we have a chance to reach the night

 

I'll try and give all I can

The feelings will remain pure

My soul's on fire, let us walk hand in hand

For you have the means for the cure

 

So let her fall right into my arms

I'll embrace her, for your magic's strong

Mr. Moonlight ... bathe me in all your charms

And we'll make love to you all night long o:):-"

Parched

 

Blame it on the hot California sun

All that smog and radiation can't be good for the brain

But there I stood, like a silent shadow;

no longer did you hang off my every gesture,

nor reach for my hand at the hint of trepidation

Our arguments lay behind us;

Our bed, our lives lay thrashed like some

heinous car wrech we were glad to walk away from

So, what was left to say really?

Logistics aside, I went from lover to stranger

and from there I would soon disappear

but that day there were errands to run

Life had to continue

 

We walked through the camp, dirty, sweaty and parched

We had suffered the freeways and failed air conditioners

What else was there to do?

The heat of a thousand suns would have been

a welcome respite

from 'our home'... our home

Such an odd thing to say now, despite those memories

of meals and moments shared together

We should have known when we fought over the decor

that our occasional bliss was, was...

It danced just beyond the horizion of my memories

like the heat induced madness I felt that moment

 

God, it wasn't fair!

You bent over to take a sip of water from the spicket

and I was caught unaware

You claimed to be suprised by the gesture

but really, I was France and you were the Howlitzer

I watched your hair fall to the side of your face

like napalm falling on Dresden

Sweat, filth and iccor could not mar the ****ing

undeniable power your every gesture command over me

So as I reached out to wash you in cool water

I thought nothing of repercussions

I did not look back to the masochistic struggles of

months past to sever the ties that bound us

We could not simply acces our inability to have

a 'healthy relationship'

 

I hacked at the problems, and hacked at your

clinging grasp like a madman severing an infected limb

Now that the pain was behind us, and 'seperation' achieved,

my defenses fell like the mighty walls of Jericho

I was powerless in your presence

 

I thought only of you as I draped the water across the

nape of your neck

Perhaps it was rare that I touched you thusly,

even in our moments of lovemaking

I looked back and saw that childlike awe and excitement

as you realized again that you were mine

 

How cruel could I be, to let that seep through?

Your flesh was bare, but that was nothing new

It was the core my clich

Mr. Moonlight ... bathe me in all your charms

 

Quite the subtle bukkake reference there.

 

In any case, good luck with your book. So you'll get published. How did you manage it?

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In any case, good luck with your book. So you'll get published. How did you manage it?

 

 

a little cash and a print on demand company o:)

(w00t) I'm just pimping my book of poetry ... which should be available soon

 

 

I hate to break it to you buddy, but you suck o:)

 

 

 

 

(unless the bukkakke reference was intentional, then its genius)

DISCLAIMER: Do not take what I write seriously unless it is clearly and in no uncertain terms, declared by me to be meant in a serious and non-humoristic manner. If there is no clear indication, asume the post is written in jest. This notification is meant very seriously and its purpouse is to avoid misunderstandings and the consequences thereof. Furthermore; I can not be held accountable for anything I write on these forums since the idea of taking serious responsability for my unserious actions, is an oxymoron in itself.

 

Important: as the following sentence contains many naughty words I warn you not to read it under any circumstances; botty, knickers, wee, erogenous zone, psychiatrist, clitoris, stockings, bosom, poetry reading, dentist, fellatio and the department of agriculture.

 

"I suppose outright stupidity and complete lack of taste could also be considered points of view. "

I don't need a book.

I live my life in Haiku's

One beat at a time.

Word economics

To express my vast wisdom

I speak in haiku's.

Sorry to tell you,

No advertising allowed.

Good luck with your book.

Any poetry that rhymes gets my approval. :shifty: I like it.

Hawk! Eggplant! AWAKEN!

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