Swinny

i think your knowlage of star wars is the only joke .. " Obi One.... amazing..

A young jedi awakes in a medlab, unaware of where s/he is, proceeds to investigate the surrounding room suddenly the door opens, and a round, black driod approaches, it doesnt take long for our young jedi to remember that s/he was captured by a team of bounty hunters and bought to GOTO for the bounty on jedi... GOTO, still annoyed that he cannot see the jedi or sith, and therefore cannot begin to restore the galaxy and let it 'settle down', is still hunting force sensitives to try and draw out either party... after staging a quick escape with the help of a protocol driod (that sadly gets destroyed before you escape goto's ship), you make way for safe land, and the home of the new, and undeveloped, jedi order on..... coroscent. as you arrive, you head straight for the jedi temple and are greeted by a receptionist who asks for you to wait untill a jedi master is avalible.. the door opens.. Jedi Master : heh, wonderd where you had got to, thought you'd ran away after i beat you at pazzak again... Young Jedi : Master Rand, its good to see you again, and if i remember, you cheated..? Jedi Master Rand : *laughs* sure kid, sure... you explain to Atton about your capture, and asks how the New Order is coming along. Atton explains that him and Brianna (handmaiden) are slowly starting to rebuild some kind of jedi order (as instructed by the exile), but admits that he is in way over his head, and is struggling seeing as he is just a meer padawan himself. He divises a plan, he explians that the New Order will need an experienced jedi to lead them, and this lead them to only one answer.. Bastila. Atton gives you an assignment.. to attempt to track down Bastila and ask her to help out with the New Order. You are sent to the last known sigting of bastila.. citidal station, telos. As you arrive you sense a calmness in the air, and notice a sign when you enter the residntial area 'welcome to telos, any inquiries please head to the ilithorian compound and ask for chodo habat' you head to the TSF main area to ask about Bastila.. lieutenant grenn : can i help you master jedi? young jedi : im searching for a woman named Bastila, she is a friend of admiral onasi's, is there any chance i can talk with him? lieutenant grenn : admiral onasi is currently on a mission, but will be arriving here shortly, untill then... i was wondering if i could ask a favour of you Master Jedi, i do not know where else to turn.. *cue pointless running around telos, make it into a mini level like peragus* after returning to grenn, he informs you that Carth has just arrived and will see you.. Carth : wonderful planet isnt she, im glad i was here to save her this time.. im sorry Master Jedi, how can i help you? Young Jedi : im searching for Bastila, the Jedi needs her help to restore the New Order, i was wondering if you knew where she was? Carth : I... lost contact with Bastila, she took off, went to the outer rim, she was desperate to know about Revan's fate... almost to the point of obsession Young Jedi : Do you know where abouts in the outer rim she went? Carth : i believe she headed for Geonosis, i'm not sure im afraid, sorry i cant help you any further Master Jedi, but she left without word. I.. i would help you look for her but i need to stay here, and help build the republic *You travel to Geonosis, in search of Bastila...* you travel through some droid factories, untill you are suddenly surrounded by a group of driods, helpless you surrender but then a flurry of blaster shots fire from the shadows.. all the driods fall to the floor.. HK-47 : queery : are you injured meatbag? Young Jedi : no im.. im fine.. thanks ... HK-47 : statment: no ned to thank me meatbag, i was mearly following my orders, much to my dissaprovment you later find out that The Exile programed HK-47 to help out any Jedi he came across, HK-47 apparently ended up on geonosisafter he was sold as wreckage, seeing as he turned himself off, he presumed that The Exile had been killed on malacor. you go through the game, going to different planets in search of bastila, not sure what encounters to have or what planets. you eventually come across Bastila on an unknown outer rim world, she is fleeing an attacker and asks for your help, you help her escape.. but only for a while. You and Bastila get lost in the Sith Academy and get cornerd in a dark room. A tall figure approaches, caped in black robes. Darth Siin : At last i have you.... jedi... Bastila : Who are you...? Darth Siin : I am your end, i am the darkness you see in the shadows, i am all that you fear Bastila : *To Young Jedi* quick, we must flee..! Darth Siin : *uses force choke on Bastila and holds her in the air* You are going nowhere jedi, you are mine now Young Jedi : *ignites lightsaber* leave her alone! *swings for Darth Siin, but with a flick of his hand, Darth Siin pushes you into a nearby wall, you are unable to move or help Bastila* Darth Siin : *To Bastila* now, young jedi, you will feel pain that you thought wasnt possbile, i will punish you for your crimes, you and all the JEDI *voice becomes angry* *you try to break free of his hold over you, but you are defensless to help Bastila* *Darth Siin ignites his saber, lets out an evil laugh and then focuses on Bastila, who is still held in the air by a choke, 'now jedi, feel, my.. PAIN' he swings his lightsaber back.....* *ppshhhhhh* *Darth Siin is thrown off his feet by an unseen force before he strikes Bastila, and Bastila falls to the floor and collapses* *a figure jumps down from the upper level and lands near you, all caped in black.. and then proceeds to ignite 2 lightsabers, 1 purple and 1 red... the masked figure turns to you....* Young Jedi : *shocked face* ...revan..! *Revan jumps to attack Darth Siin, and they ignite in a lightsaber battle, Revan overwhealms Darth Siin but then Darth Siin lifts a large metal table and throws it at Bastila's unconcious body, Revan, lowers his defenses and pushes the table away from her path, and with this Darth Siin send Revan across the room with a shot of lightning, however Revan jumps straight back up, apparently unhamred by the Sith Lord's attack* Darth Siin : *suprised voice*.. you.. you.. i thought we killed you... impossible.. *he then flee's the room* Revan runs over to Bastila's body and picks her up, then releases you from your statis. Young Jedi : we need to get out of here, which is the way out? Revan : *points to a door and runs towards it still holding Bastila* you follow Revan untill you finally reach the outer area and your ship, the three of you get onboard and flee the planet. Revan rests Bastila in the medlab and strokes her hair, Revan then turns and looks at you, then removes his mask... Revan : thankyou for you help friend, if it wasnt for you i wouldnt have been able to get to her in time. Young Jedi : i should be thanking you really, you saved all of us Revan : yeah, *slight laugh*, its a habit of mine. I must ask you thou, what were you and Bastila doing out here? infact.. who are you? you explain to Revan that you were in search of Bastila to ask for her help in rebuilding the New Order, you also relate to him the events of The Exile, sion, nilhius and traya. Revan explians that he must return to coroscent imidiatly.. but before you that... HK-47 :shocked statment: master? i thought that you had perished in typical meatbag fashion! oh it brings joys to my circuits to see you alive, master. you arrive on coroscent and take Revan and Bastila to see Atton and Brianna, Revan explains that the 'True Sith' have a whole army waiting in the outer rim, and that they plan to attack the republic in a few days time, and that they are going to attack coroscent first. Atton suggests that Revan should take over the Jedi Academy and co ordinate with the republic fleet, Revan agree's. *Before the planning begind, Revan visists Bastila in the medlab, she is still unconcious but Revan stays by her side, and whispers in her ear, kisses her on the cheek and then stand up, looks out the window and you see his face intensify. He takes one last look at Bastila and leaves the room* as he leaves the room... Carth : long time no see Revan : *smiles* Carth... Carth : now im sure you've got some, long winded jedi story to tell me, that i probably wont undestand but.. there's time for that later, we're got a war to win Revan : *nods head* then lets get to work Days go by as Revan, Carth, Atton, Brianna and you finalise the battle plans untill finally word of a massive fleet has just dropped out of hyperspace... it was time. A massive battle on coroscent takes place, a bit like on Onderon, but much bigger and longer. Untill finally the battle comes to ahead in the Jedi Temple... Atton, Brianna, Revan and you stand in the room of a thousend waterfalls as the Sith storm the place, you all make light work of the Sith apprentacies and Dark Padawan's. Then, Darth Siin enters along with his apprentice, they both ignite their lightsabers... Then suddenly, 2 more Sith lords, each with apprentice behind them enters.... Atton : i thought you sith had the rule of two? you know, only two of you bantha fodder's at a time? Darth Siin : *laughs* There are different factions of the sith, fool jedi, but now we all unite under one banner to destroy the likes of you! You : ive got abad feeling about this All of a sudden, the 3 Sith Lords and 3 Apprentices all ignite their lightsabers Dath Siin : time to die... jedi The battle that has been in plans since the beginning of the mandalorian wars, the true war of this time, is about to begin... a massive lightsaber duel erupts, Darth Siin and another Sith Lord attack Revan, the other Sith lord attacks you, the 3 Apprentices attack Atton and Brianna. Revan and you fend off the Sith Lords, however Atton and Brianna struggle against the powerfull Dark Apprentices, all of a sudden Brianna falls silent.. Atton looks over to see her body crumpled on the floor, she had been stabbed in the chest by one of the Dark Apprentices. Atton : *shouts* nooooo, brianna, no.. no.. damn you Sith scum! Atton lashes out at the 3 remaining Apprentices but they easily overpower him and aventually all combine to force push him into a solid wall, he falls to the floor in a crumpled heap. the 3 dark Apprentices turn their attention to you and Revan, the battle turns in the favour of the sith as they over power you and Revan, when it seems like all hope is lost, you and Revan are backed against the glass walls of the jedi temple, worn and exhusted, helpless. Darth Siin : i have waited for this day, the day when the jedi would meet their... all of a sudden laser blasts shower in from the roof and wipe out 2 of the Apprentices, the sith lords make for cover, Revan and you look up.. the Ebon Hawk swoops down and stops outside the window, the side hatch opens and T3 signals for you to jump on board quickly, you jump on but Revan refuses to leave Bastila, you tell him that he cant do anything to help her, and that he must save himself for the sake of the jedi.. he agree's, and with one last glancing look towards the medbay me gets onboard, the ebon hawk soars into the sky.... You board the Ebon hawk with Revan, you head to the ****pit to find the Exile.. Exile : good to see you made it Revan Revan :Good thing you showed up in time, general, i knew i could always rely on you Exile : I followed you then Revan, and i'll follow you now Back on coroscent : Darth Siin orders the Sith lords to take bastila to his ship, and to leave all the dead jedi as a reminder of what will happen to those that cross the true sith. Bastila is taken onboard Siin's flagship and placed in a torture chamber (with clothes on, this isnt saul karath whistling.gif ) The Sith fleet continue to battle the republic forces, under Carth's command, the battle is a heated one and neither side want to give way. The battle lights up the skies of coroscent. Back on the Ebon Hawk, Revan says that he is going after Bastila, and then he is going to destroy the sith. You and The Exile agree that he's going to need all the help he can get, so you all arm up and set a course for Darth Siin's flagship, the largest ship in the sith fleet above coroscent. The Ebon Hawk joins up with the republic fleet, Revan orders carths ships to provide cover for the Ebon Hawk as it swoops in and attempts to board Darth Siin's flagship. As you board, Carth tells you that the sith are starting to gain the advantage, and that Darth Siin's flagship has too much firepower and is wiping out the fleet. Revan decides that he and The Exile will go after Bastila, and you should head to the lower decks and disable the weapons system and then meet up with Revan and The Exile when they have Bastila. Agreeing, you head to the lower decks, where you encounter many sith apprentacies, you finally get to the weapons system and manage to disable them. You comm Revan and learn that he and Exile are near the bridge, and tell you to meet them there. As you make your way to the bridge, you find many rooms full of jedi and sith holocrons, many of the ones that were on telos and lost in the Jedi academy on dantooine, and some were taken from coroscent. You make it to the bridge just in time... Darth Siin and the 2 sith lords stand on the bridge, You, Revan and Exile all ignite your lightsabers, but Revan stops you, and notices that Bastila is also on the bridge and is hooked up to some machine, and is still unconcious. Revan: im going after Siin, you two take your pick, and i ask you, whatever happends on this bridge, make sure Bastila survives and with the, he leaps into battle with Darth Siin, you and Exile each attack a sith lord. The battle is going in your favour and you start to push the sith back, Exile force pushes a Sith Lord over, and leaps ontop of him and slices him in half. You battle the other Sith lord, he lunges for you but you evade and force push him away, near to the ships reactor... with that you and exile combine your force pushes and send the sith lord into the ships reactor.. that only leaves Revan and Darth Siin.. Revan clearly has the upper hand, and Siin is on the defensive... Siin flee's the lightsaber duel and runs over to where Bastila is being held Darth Siin : jedi fools, you think you are winning but really you are just a pawn in my game, now we will see just how powerfull you so-called jedi are! he raises a hand to Bastila (who is suspended in a force cage) and a red light eminates from her body and into Siin's Revan : he.. he is drawing her force powers out of her body and into his, i can feel my power failing..... our bond... mine and Bastila's bond... no... Revan falls to the floor, grasping his chest... Revan : he.. he is draining the force from me and bastila... you must... with that, Revan stops breathing and lays lifeless on the floor Exile : revan.. no... it cant.. wait.. wait... hold on Revan With this, the exile sits down and begins to meditate.. he grimaces... Exile : if.. if i can just.... form a bond with Revan and share my life force with him and bastila.. i might be able to save them... you... you must kill Siin... otherwise.. he will kill us all... You ignite your lightsaber and turn towards Siin Darth Siin : *laughs loud* you cannot beat me jedi, you are a meer padawan, i am the lord of the sith! you will meet your doom and then i will deal with you 'friends' You and Siin do battle, a fierce battle that with it holds the lifes of Revan, Bastila and the exile. You are on the back foot, you may be strong but you are no match for a sith lord, his force powers overwhelm you, your mind cant cope with his power and you start to retreat, you fall to the floor almost certained for doom, but you feel a hand grab you and pull you back to your feet Atton : didnt think i'd leave you that easily did ya kid? You : Master Rand! i thought you... died on coroscent..? Atton : i took a beating, but you know me, if ive still got friends standing you cant keep me down. Darth Siin unleashes a force lightning at you and Atton, Atton jumps infron of you and takes the blow.. he falls to the floor and turns to you Atton : you cant beat him, he is to powerful, but you can outsmart him *coughs* thats how i... survived once... you must throw up walls in your mind, like i taught you, block his force powers, play *laughs and coughs* play pazakk in your head... With this, you call upon Atton's previous training, and throw up a wall in your mind. Darth Siin attempts to statis you but fails.. Darth Siin : wha.. impossible.. you.. you are strong.. but.. but you shall not survive! you and Siin enter another fierce battle, but this time his force powers are affecting you and you are a match for him... with one final crash og your lightsaber (or force power) you send him to his knee's, he delivers one final speech and then falls. (and dies) you run over to Revan and the Exile, Exile comes out of his trance Exile : is.. is it over? is Siin destroyed? You : yes, yes he is Exile : but.. Revan and Bastila... i dont know if i... With this, Revans lifeless body draws breath, and slowely gets up, he looks over to Bastila and stumbles towards her cage and disables it. Her body falls out of the cage and into Revans arms, he stares at her face, waiting a response.. but there is none..... suddenly she grasps breath and her eyes open wide... Bastila : didnt think you could get rid of me that easily did you? Revan : Bastil.. i thought... but you were... i.. Bastila : shut up and kiss me you babbling fool 9or whatever Revan says to her in kotor1) After a passionate kiss, Revan decides that leaving now would be a good idea, so you, revan, bastila, exile and the heavily beaten atton make way to the ebon hawk and escape to victory, Revan gives the message to carth to destroy the sith fleet, Bastila uses her battle meditation to aid the republic fleet, as it mops up the sith fleet. the final scene is Revan, Exile, you, Atton, Bastila and many other people celerating on coroscent, as the camera pans, the ghosts of all the dead jedi can be seen, such jedi as Jolee, Juhani, Kavar, Vandar, Vrook, Zhan and Brianna. the camera focuses on Revan and Exile, and they both look over to a nearby window and can see the ghost of Kreia who nods her head, the camera pans back to Exile and Revan and they both smile, then pans to You, who also smiles... camera then pans out to show the whole party and all the jedi ghosts.. credits role... sumthin like.. that :D

yeah... fine ... i'll go to hell where all the horrid stuff in the world is, like your personality and pathetic attempts at insulting people "

lol yeah, me too, fills the time nicely never completed it as a female thou.... all 11 times as a male same with kotor 2 pah, i scoff at the idea of female jedi

ive completed kotor 1 - 11 times and kotor 2 - 5 times (currently on 6th) :">

hey Lord Orpheus, have u read my kotor3 short story thing, its on here about 8 posts down, give it a read tell em what ya think

i cant find anywhere which is good for kotor talk, only really this place and lucas arts forum (which is full of children) sniff :"> malak wasnt bad with a saber... he could do that really cool multiple twirly thing when he ignited it... then he's wave his hand in a 'come on then' movement meh

meh, i'd like to see anyone else take on palpatine AND anakin (vader by then) and still hold his own for a while... i mean, the 2 most powerful sith ever attacking you and he was caught off guard by anakins betrayal. oh and he made a joke out of jango fett. ah well, he's dead now why did you say yoda was the best.. i mean he jumps a lot, but he's a consular.. he pretty much sucks when it comes to lightsaber..

LOL malak! this is a bitch of a question for multiple reasons... Mace Windu is the most skilled, he is after all a form VII master (hence the purple lightsaber) and i think he is only the 2nd jeid ever to master this form.... but dont quote me on that. however... Obi Wan would beat mace windu because he's also very skilled, clever but also the luckest jedi that ever lived, i think lucas said that Obi Wan was the best duelest ever because he was so lucky but again.. however.. luke would beat any of them, he may not be as skilled or anything, but the force is with him, and he's the only jedi to ever have had the force truely on his side. the force see's luke as the only pure, unarrogent and general really nice guy which is why luke ends up so powerful with so little training. this basically makes him invincable But i'll vote mace, cus he doesnt have amazing luck, he doesnt have invincable status he's just a bad ass with a purple blade (w00t)

power can be measured in many ways.. yoda has the most knowlage and experience which counts for a lot palpatine has the brains, and the raw force power, but is too greedy and eventually gets destroyed because he thinks he can forsee everything obi wan is a fantastic weapon master, even more so than mace winduu (cus he's so damn lucky only) overall thou luke is the most powerful, and in a duel or even knowlage would best anyone (when he reaches his peak)

hehe cheers guys for your support. i will admit i rushed it, i was just bored and spouted some kotor crap for 2 houres and ended up with that i might make it more detailed, and into an actual game. I didnt really focus on all the other party members, or the worlds etc, just the main story. i wanted to bring vandar back into it seeing as he never actually died on or off screen, and i was gonna do some twists like, Revan died but the exile put on his mask and cape and pretended to be Revan. but hey, this i star wars, people dont die in star wars like in most other films. i wanna do some more dialog, cus i find that the most fun part, i need a comical charecter, i might bring back jolee.. dare i " i was thinking of having Dustil Onasi as your main party member (like carth and atton), Dustil could be a jedi padawan as well. Of course i;d have to find if there is any truth in the whole kotor2 sith cave and dustil story. anyone got any more opinions or suggestions? i need names for sith lords and new charecters :D

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i kinda rished that, its just a basic plan i dont know if i explianed it well. Atton and Brianna were taken on board of Darth Siin's flagship as 'prizes', thats how Atton got on there. Also, on the bridge, Revan and Bastila's bond is exploitted so Revan is weakened when bastila is used to draw her life force from her. then the Exile uses his ability to create force bonds and feed of other force users and reverses the efffect, he fuels Revan and Bastila with his life force to balance it out, but they are all slowly dying. thanks again :D

the saga continues.... You board the Ebon hawk with Revan, you head to the ****pit to find the Exile.. Exile : good to see you made it Revan Revan :Good thing you showed up in time, general, i knew i could always rely on you Exile : I followed you then Revan, and i'll follow you now Back on coroscent : Darth Siin orders the Sith lords to take bastila to his ship, and to leave all the dead jedi as a reminder of what will happen to those that cross the true sith. Bastila is taken onboard Siin's flagship and placed in a torture chamber (with clothes on, this isnt saul karath " ) The Sith fleet continue to battle the republic forces, under Carth's command, the battle is a heated one and neither side want to give way. The battle lights up the skies of coroscent. Back on the Ebon Hawk, Revan says that he is going after Bastila, and then he is going to destroy the sith. You and The Exile agree that he's going to need all the help he can get, so you all arm up and set a course for Darth Siin's flagship, the largest ship in the sith fleet above coroscent. The Ebon Hawk joins up with the republic fleet, Revan orders carths ships to provide cover for the Ebon Hawk as it swoops in and attempts to board Darth Siin's flagship. As you board, Carth tells you that the sith are starting to gain the advantage, and that Darth Siin's flagship has too much firepower and is wiping out the fleet. Revan decides that he and The Exile will go after Bastila, and you should head to the lower decks and disable the weapons system and then meet up with Revan and The Exile when they have Bastila. Agreeing, you head to the lower decks, where you encounter many sith apprentacies, you finally get to the weapons system and manage to disable them. You comm Revan and learn that he and Exile are near the bridge, and tell you to meet them there. As you make your way to the bridge, you find many rooms full of jedi and sith holocrons, many of the ones that were on telos and lost in the Jedi academy on dantooine, and some were taken from coroscent. You make it to the bridge just in time... Darth Siin and the 2 sith lords stand on the bridge, You, Revan and Exile all ignite your lightsabers, but Revan stops you, and notices that Bastila is also on the bridge and is hooked up to some machine, and is still unconcious. Revan: im going after Siin, you two take your pick, and i ask you, whatever happends on this bridge, make sure Bastila survives and with the, he leaps into battle with Darth Siin, you and Exile each attack a sith lord. The battle is going in your favour and you start to push the sith back, Exile force pushes a Sith Lord over, and leaps ontop of him and slices him in half. You battle the other Sith lord, he lunges for you but you evade and force push him away, near to the ships reactor... with that you and exile combine your force pushes and send the sith lord into the ships reactor.. that only leaves Revan and Darth Siin.. Revan clearly has the upper hand, and Siin is on the defensive... Siin flee's the lightsaber duel and runs over to where Bastila is being held Darth Siin : jedi fools, you think you are winning but really you are just a pawn in my game, now we will see just how powerfull you so-called jedi are! he raises a hand to Bastila (who is suspended in a force cage) and a red light eminates from her body and into Siin's Revan : he.. he is drawing her force powers out of her body and into his, i can feel my power failing..... our bond... mine and Bastila's bond... no... Revan falls to the floor, grasping his chest... Revan : he.. he is draining the force from me and bastila... you must... with that, Revan stops breathing and lays lifeless on the floor Exile : revan.. no... it cant.. wait.. wait... hold on Revan With this, the exile sits down and begins to meditate.. he grimaces... Exile : if.. if i can just.... form a bond with Revan and share my life force with him and bastila.. i might be able to save them... you... you must kill Siin... otherwise.. he will kill us all... You ignite your lightsaber and turn towards Siin Darth Siin : *laughs loud* you cannot beat me jedi, you are a meer padawan, i am the lord of the sith! you will meet your doom and then i will deal with you 'friends' You and Siin do battle, a fierce battle that with it holds the lifes of Revan, Bastila and the exile. You are on the back foot, you may be strong but you are no match for a sith lord, his force powers overwhelm you, your mind cant cope with his power and you start to retreat, you fall to the floor almost certained for doom, but you feel a hand grab you and pull you back to your feet Atton : didnt think i'd leave you that easily did ya kid? You : Master Rand! i thought you... died on coroscent..? Atton : i took a beating, but you know me, if ive still got friends standing you cant keep me down. Darth Siin unleashes a force lightning at you and Atton, Atton jumps infron of you and takes the blow.. he falls to the floor and turns to you Atton : you cant beat him, he is to powerful, but you can outsmart him *coughs* thats how i... survived once... you must throw up walls in your mind, like i taught you, block his force powers, play *laughs and coughs* play pazakk in your head... With this, you call upon Atton's previous training, and throw up a wall in your mind. Darth Siin attempts to statis you but fails.. Darth Siin : wha.. impossible.. you.. you are strong.. but.. but you shall not survive! you and Siin enter another fierce battle, but this time his force powers are affecting you and you are a match for him... with one final crash og your lightsaber (or force power) you send him to his knee's, he delivers one final speech and then falls. (and dies) you run over to Revan and the Exile, Exile comes out of his trance Exile : is.. is it over? is Siin destroyed? You : yes, yes he is Exile : but.. Revan and Bastila... i dont know if i... With this, Revans lifeless body draws breath, and slowely gets up, he looks over to Bastila and stumbles towards her cage and disables it. Her body falls out of the cage and into Revans arms, he stares at her face, waiting a response.. but there is none..... suddenly she grasps breath and her eyes open wide... Bastila : didnt think you could get rid of me that easily did you? Revan : Bastil.. i thought... but you were... i.. Bastila : shut up and kiss me you babbling fool 9or whatever Revan says to her in kotor1) After a passionate kiss, Revan decides that leaving now would be a good idea, so you, revan, bastila, exile and the heavily beaten atton make way to the ebon hawk and escape to victory, Revan gives the message to carth to destroy the sith fleet, Bastila uses her battle meditation to aid the republic fleet, as it mops up the sith fleet. the final scene is Revan, Exile, you, Atton, Bastila and many other people celerating on coroscent, as the camera pans, the ghosts of all the dead jedi can be seen, such jedi as Jolee, Juhani, Kavar, Vandar, Vrook, Zhan and Brianna. the camera focuses on Revan and Exile, and they both look over to a nearby window and can see the ghost of Kreia who nods her head, the camera pans back to Exile and Revan and they both smile, then pans to You, who also smiles... camera then pans out to show the whole party and all the jedi ghosts.. credits role... phew, its finished :D i msut say i loved writing this, and it only took me a few houres and i was only really messing around, i might re-write the story with much more dialog, planets and of course who the PC's party members will be thanks to everyone for reading this and offering their comments! if anyone has any idea's please post them and i will put them in (if they are good :cool: ), or any more idea's (like the name of the 2 other sith lords, or any party members) i was thinking of including a female tweilek jedi, who knows thanks to everyone again, this story is for the fans of kotor swinny

thanks everyone for your feedback, in your answer to the question 'where is the exile' he is flying the ebon hawk when it saved Revan and PC from the sith lords, im gonna do the final part tonight, where you have to fight through all the sith ranks with Revan and Exile in your party, im just thinking of a good ending and maybe some changes to the story, any more feedback would be ace thanks to everyone again

phew, there's the 2nd installment, only one left now if anyone else has any idea's please contrtibute, like any plot changes or new names, any help would be cool thanks to everyone reading this

the saga continues... Revan runs over to Bastila's body and picks her up, then releases you from your statis. Young Jedi : we need to get out of here, which is the way out? Revan : *points to a door and runs towards it still holding Bastila* you follow Revan untill you finally reach the outer area and your ship, the three of you get onboard and flee the planet. Revan rests Bastila in the medlab and strokes her hair, Revan then turns and looks at you, then removes his mask... Revan : thankyou for you help friend, if it wasnt for you i wouldnt have been able to get to her in time. Young Jedi : i should be thanking you really, you saved all of us Revan : yeah, *slight laugh*, its a habit of mine. I must ask you thou, what were you and Bastila doing out here? infact.. who are you? you explain to Revan that you were in search of Bastila to ask for her help in rebuilding the New Order, you also relate to him the events of The Exile, sion, nilhius and traya. Revan explians that he must return to coroscent imidiatly.. but before you that... HK-47 :shocked statment: master? i thought that you had perished in typical meatbag fashion! oh it brings joys to my circuits to see you alive, master. you arrive on coroscent and take Revan and Bastila to see Atton and Brianna, Revan explains that the 'True Sith' have a whole army waiting in the outer rim, and that they plan to attack the republic in a few days time, and that they are going to attack coroscent first. Atton suggests that Revan should take over the Jedi Academy and co ordinate with the republic fleet, Revan agree's. *Before the planning begind, Revan visists Bastila in the medlab, she is still unconcious but Revan stays by her side, and whispers in her ear, kisses her on the cheek and then stand up, looks out the window and you see his face intensify. He takes one last look at Bastila and leaves the room* as he leaves the room... Carth : long time no see Revan : *smiles* Carth... Carth : now im sure you've got some, long winded jedi story to tell me, that i probably wont undestand but.. there's time for that later, we're got a war to win Revan : *nods head* then lets get to work Days go by as Revan, Carth, Atton, Brianna and you finalise the battle plans untill finally word of a massive fleet has just dropped out of hyperspace... it was time. A massive battle on coroscent takes place, a bit like on Onderon, but much bigger and longer. Untill finally the battle comes to ahead in the Jedi Temple... Atton, Brianna, Revan and you stand in the room of a thousend waterfalls as the Sith storm the place, you all make light work of the Sith apprentacies and Dark Padawan's. Then, Darth Siin enters along with his apprentice, they both ignite their lightsabers... Then suddenly, 2 more Sith lords, each with apprentice behind them enters.... Atton : i thought you sith had the rule of two? you know, only two of you bantha fodder's at a time? Darth Siin : *laughs* There are different factions of the sith, fool jedi, but now we all unite under one banner to destroy the likes of you! You : ive got abad feeling about this All of a sudden, the 3 Sith Lords and 3 Apprentices all ignite their lightsabers Dath Siin : time to die... jedi The battle that has been in plans since the beginning of the mandalorian wars, the true war of this time, is about to begin... a massive lightsaber duel erupts, Darth Siin and another Sith Lord attack Revan, the other Sith lord attacks you, the 3 Apprentices attack Atton and Brianna. Revan and you fend off the Sith Lords, however Atton and Brianna struggle against the powerfull Dark Apprentices, all of a sudden Brianna falls silent.. Atton looks over to see her body crumpled on the floor, she had been stabbed in the chest by one of the Dark Apprentices. Atton : *shouts* nooooo, brianna, no.. no.. damn you Sith scum! Atton lashes out at the 3 remaining Apprentices but they easily overpower him and aventually all combine to force push him into a solid wall, he falls to the floor in a crumpled heap. the 3 dark Apprentices turn their attention to you and Revan, the battle turns in the favour of the sith as they over power you and Revan, when it seems like all hope is lost, you and Revan are backed against the glass walls of the jedi temple, worn and exhusted, helpless. Darth Siin : i have waited for this day, the day when the jedi would meet their... all of a sudden laser blasts shower in from the roof and wipe out 2 of the Apprentices, the sith lords make for cover, Revan and you look up.. the Ebon Hawk swoops down and stops outside the window, the side hatch opens and T3 signals for you to jump on board quickly, you jump on but Revan refuses to leave Bastila, you tell him that he cant do anything to help her, and that he must save himself for the sake of the jedi.. he agree's, and with one last glancing look towards the medbay me gets onboard, the ebon hawk soars into the sky....

A young jedi awakes in a medlab, unaware of where s/he is, proceeds to investigate the surrounding room suddenly the door opens, and a round, black driod approaches, it doesnt take long for our young jedi to remember that s/he was captured by a team of bounty hunters and bought to GOTO for the bounty on jedi... GOTO, still annoyed that he cannot see the jedi or sith, and therefore cannot begin to restore the galaxy and let it 'settle down', is still hunting force sensitives to try and draw out either party... after staging a quick escape with the help of a protocol driod (that sadly gets destroyed before you escape goto's ship), you make way for safe land, and the home of the new, and undeveloped, jedi order on..... coroscent. as you arrive, you head straight for the jedi temple and are greeted by a receptionist who asks for you to wait untill a jedi master is avalible.. the door opens.. Jedi Master : heh, wonderd where you had got to, thought you'd ran away after i beat you at pazzak again... Young Jedi : Master Rand, its good to see you again, and if i remember, you cheated..? Jedi Master Rand : *laughs* sure kid, sure... you explain to Atton about your capture, and asks how the New Order is coming along. Atton explains that him and Brianna (handmaiden) are slowly starting to rebuild some kind of jedi order (as instructed by the exile), but admits that he is in way over his head, and is struggling seeing as he is just a meer padawan himself. He divises a plan, he explians that the New Order will need an experienced jedi to lead them, and this lead them to only one answer.. Bastila. Atton gives you an assignment.. to attempt to track down Bastila and ask her to help out with the New Order. You are sent to the last known sigting of bastila.. citidal station, telos. As you arrive you sense a calmness in the air, and notice a sign when you enter the residntial area 'welcome to telos, any inquiries please head to the ilithorian compound and ask for chodo habat' you head to the TSF main area to ask about Bastila.. lieutenant grenn : can i help you master jedi? young jedi : im searching for a woman named Bastila, she is a friend of admiral onasi's, is there any chance i can talk with him? lieutenant grenn : admiral onasi is currently on a mission, but will be arriving here shortly, untill then... i was wondering if i could ask a favour of you Master Jedi, i do not know where else to turn.. *cue pointless running around telos, make it into a mini level like peragus* after returning to grenn, he informs you that Carth has just arrived and will see you.. Carth : wonderful planet isnt she, im glad i was here to save her this time.. im sorry Master Jedi, how can i help you? Young Jedi : im searching for Bastila, the Jedi needs her help to restore the New Order, i was wondering if you knew where she was? Carth : I... lost contact with Bastila, she took off, went to the outer rim, she was desperate to know about Revan's fate... almost to the point of obsession Young Jedi : Do you know where abouts in the outer rim she went? Carth : i believe she headed for Geonosis, i'm not sure im afraid, sorry i cant help you any further Master Jedi, but she left without word. I.. i would help you look for her but i need to stay here, and help build the republic *You travel to Geonosis, in search of Bastila...* you travel through some droid factories, untill you are suddenly surrounded by a group of driods, helpless you surrender but then a flurry of blaster shots fire from the shadows.. all the driods fall to the floor.. HK-47 : queery : are you injured meatbag? Young Jedi : no im.. im fine.. thanks ... HK-47 : statment: no ned to thank me meatbag, i was mearly following my orders, much to my dissaprovment you later find out that The Exile programed HK-47 to help out any Jedi he came across, HK-47 apparently ended up on geonosisafter he was sold as wreckage, seeing as he turned himself off, he presumed that The Exile had been killed on malacor. you go through the game, going to different planets in search of bastila, not sure what encounters to have or what planets. you eventually come across Bastila on an unknown outer rim world, she is fleeing an attacker and asks for your help, you help her escape.. but only for a while. You and Bastila get lost in the Sith Academy and get cornerd in a dark room. A tall figure approaches, caped in black robes. Darth Siin : At last i have you.... jedi... Bastila : Who are you...? Darth Siin : I am your end, i am the darkness you see in the shadows, i am all that you fear Bastila : *To Young Jedi* quick, we must flee..! Darth Siin : *uses force choke on Bastila and holds her in the air* You are going nowhere jedi, you are mine now Young Jedi : *ignites lightsaber* leave her alone! *swings for Darth Siin, but with a flick of his hand, Darth Siin pushes you into a nearby wall, you are unable to move or help Bastila* Darth Siin : *To Bastila* now, young jedi, you will feel pain that you thought wasnt possbile, i will punish you for your crimes, you and all the JEDI *voice becomes angry* *you try to break free of his hold over you, but you are defensless to help Bastila* *Darth Siin ignites his saber, lets out an evil laugh and then focuses on Bastila, who is still held in the air by a choke, 'now jedi, feel, my.. PAIN' he swings his lightsaber back.....* *ppshhhhhh* *Darth Siin is thrown off his feet by an unseen force before he strikes Bastila, and Bastila falls to the floor and collapses* *a figure jumps down from the upper level and lands near you, all caped in black.. and then proceeds to ignite 2 lightsabers, 1 purple and 1 red... the masked figure turns to you....* Young Jedi : *shocked face* ...revan..! *Revan jumps to attack Darth Siin, and they ignite in a lightsaber battle, Revan overwhealms Darth Siin but then Darth Siin lifts a large metal table and throws it at Bastila's unconcious body, Revan, lowers his defenses and pushes the table away from her path, and with this Darth Siin send Revan across the room with a shot of lightning, however Revan jumps straight back up, apparently unhamred by the Sith Lord's attack* Darth Siin : *suprised voice*.. you.. you.. i thought we killed you... impossible.. *he then flee's the room* well thats as far as ive got at the mo, im gonan finish the rest now, what do you all think..? :">

hey everyone, im about to create my perfect kotor2 game, i wanan cover everything. I just wanted any advice you guys can offer, im gonna be male lightside, sentinal then weaponmaster, im gonna be focused on lightsaber combat. Should i do dex or str based, i prefer dex but many pthers say str is the best? starting stats? i'll probably go str - 12 dex - 14 con - 14 (get upto 18) int - 16 (mmmm skills ) wis - 10 char - 10 yeah low wis and char, shouldnt mater thou... :"> i'm really torn between single lightsaber, or duel wielding. Single sabers look cool, like proper star wars jedi, and also you get it early in the game, handy +3 for defense and attack as well.... however, duel wielding does look cool, all those extra upgrades, stunnigly over the top dmg (master speed, 2 sabers, master flurry = 5 attacks all usually 30 or 40+) the thing is, you do too much dmg with 2 sabers, i wanna make the game a bit realistic, not some kind of, jedi ass whipping. :ph34r: and if i use one saber, is it better to go with crit strike, or flurry? what about with 2 sabers?? i usually go flurry, but crit strike seems so cool, and more jedi like rather than thrashing around trying to hit everything. (also crit strike seems clever, somehow..) im gonna use jedi robes and upgrades, nothin on my head thou, cus it looks stupid if your a jedi. also, does anyone know what lvl i should get my skills to, to max them out. for example whats the highest stat in security you need to open everything in the game, and repair for breaking down items? any more tips anyone can offer? many thanks

would kotor2 be better if you were allowed to make your own face? all the cutscenes involving your charecter are in real time, so it could be possible. to be honest, in kotor2, i'd only ever use 3 or 4 of the faces, most of them suck big time. would be cool if you could make your own face, and build, and jedi robes. sniff, i love making charecters (shame i cant spell it)

lol - update.. im half way through peragus.. and im bored man it take flippin ages to kill a fffffffflippin mining droid with a crappy pistol vibeoblade - flurry - all over my mining driod friend! bah i miss being a jedi, i think im gonna quit this game sniff :">

well here's the build up im gonna use jedi sentinal (i wanna be guardian.. but they only get 1 more feat by lvl15.. and i.. need... skills..) actually, bounty hunters are very skilled, upgrading their weapons and such, and its only 2hp per lvl, not really worth it so im gonna go with str - 8 dex - 16 con - 16 int - 16 wis - 8 chr - 8 im gonna be wearing stuff that lowers my wis and char, but increases my force resist and will, so i wont need eis or char. also dont need str, im a blaster king! this should be interesting to play..

hmm, im tepted to play through kotor2 as a bountry hunter, ive already complted it 4 times, wanan make a twist on it. could you just boost dex and con only, wear armour, a mask, 2 blasters, and complete the game? there are so many blaster feats, im just thinking playing agsisnt jedi that can deflect blaster fire, i might get owned. especially against sion i find kotor 2 way too easy, though this might be an interesting twist, ex-jedi turned into worlds best bounty hunter or would i just get bored, and whip out my lightsaber

hehe :D thought that would get a few laughs someone said that to me ages ago, i just laughed in his face. lucas has admitted that star wars is just a jumble of every film and religion ever, its hard to pick which is the most prominent

erm, guys you know there is a jedi religion, that has been running for thousends of years.. its called 'jedism', look it up in google if you dont believe me. there 'code' consists of being nice to everyone you meet, and being a bubble of light, and all those you interact with come into your bubble and stuff like that, their 'religious place' is some big mountin i did a project on them in college, quite interesting