March 17, 20169 yr Here are the grammatical errors I've found in the tutorial prompts in Build 2 in order of appearance: "There are 8 different types of cards: Monsters and Barriers are banes while, Weapons..." S/B "...banes, while Weapons..." "Ameiko is a Bard, accomplished with both weapons and magic, she..." S/B "...and magic, who..." "Defeating some scenarios will grant Feats, these..." S/B "...Feats, which..." "Each character has a special set of Skills, here..." S/B "...Skills. Here..." "Drag the panel up then tap..." S/B "...panel up, and then tap..." "In normal play, you can drag the character portraits to change the turn order, for this tutorial the turn..." S/B "...turn order. For this tutorial, the turn..." "Display: Show the card temporarily until it is sent elsewhere - usually..." S/B "...elsewhere, usually..." "It is worth discarding for important rolls like monster fights and..." S/B "...rolls, like monster fights, and..." "If you have an armor recharge it, to..." S/B "...armor, recharge it to..." "By playing the right weapon or spell card, you can improve your roll, and your chances..." S/B "...your roll and chances..." "They will cover their tracks drawing from the Blessing Deck - making..." S/B "...Blessing Deck, making..." "If the villain is cornered and defeated - you win!" S/B "...defeated, you win!" "If you are done exploring tap..." S/B "...exploring, tap..." "Ameiko's acrobatics will help her in the Warrens (Top...." S/B "...Warrens (top..." "Each turn a card..." S/B "Each turn, a card..." Also, I've noticed some prompts have punctuation at the end of their sentences while some don't. You get only one chance to make a first impression, right?
April 5, 20169 yr Author Were these errors corrected in Beta 3? I checked the Beta 3 tutorial and noticed many of them are still outstanding, or have been changed and are still erroneous. If you plan to fix them before launch, I'll run through the Beta 3 tutorial, again, and create a new thread documenting the errors.
April 5, 20169 yr Were these errors corrected in Beta 3? I checked the Beta 3 tutorial and noticed many of them are still outstanding, or have been changed and are still erroneous. If you plan to fix them before launch, I'll run through the Beta 3 tutorial, again, and create a new thread documenting the errors. Grammar errors have been corrected Never tell me the odds! I probably wrote them
April 5, 20169 yr You mean, "Grammar errors have been corrected(period)". You know, I was starting to like you all... Never tell me the odds! I probably wrote them
April 5, 20169 yr You mean, "Grammar errors have been corrected(period)". You know, I was starting to like you all... Don't you mean, "y'all"
April 6, 20169 yr You mean, "Grammar errors have been corrected(period)". You know, I was starting to like you all... Don't you mean, "y'all" Never tell me the odds! I probably wrote them
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