Tutorial, Grammatical Errors, Build 2

[Mysterio]

Here are the grammatical errors I've found in the tutorial prompts in Build 2 in order of appearance:

• ​"There are 8 different types of cards: Monsters and Barriers are banes while, Weapons..." S/B "...banes, while Weapons..."
• ​"Ameiko is a Bard, accomplished with both weapons and magic, she..." S/B "...and magic, who..."
• "Defeating some scenarios will grant Feats, these..." S/B "...Feats, which..."
• "Each character has a special set of Skills, here..." S/B "...Skills.  Here..."
• "Drag the panel up then tap..." S/B "...panel up, and then tap..."
• "In normal play, you can drag the character portraits to change the turn order, for this tutorial the turn..." S/B "...turn order.  For this tutorial, the turn..."
• "Display: Show the card temporarily until it is sent elsewhere - usually..." S/B "...elsewhere, usually..."
• "It is worth discarding for important rolls like monster fights and..." S/B "...rolls, like monster fights, and..."
• "If you have an armor recharge it, to..." S/B "...armor, recharge it to..."
• "By playing the right weapon or spell card, you can improve your roll, and your chances..." S/B "...your roll and chances..."
• "They will cover their tracks drawing from the Blessing Deck - making..." S/B "...Blessing Deck, making..."
• "If the villain is cornered and defeated - you win!" S/B "...defeated, you win!"
• "If you are done exploring tap..." S/B "...exploring, tap..."
• "Ameiko's acrobatics will help her in the Warrens (Top...." S/B "...Warrens (top..."
• "Each turn a card..." S/B "Each turn, a card..."
• Also, I've noticed some prompts have punctuation at the end of their sentences while some don't.

You get only one chance to make a first impression, right?  

[Mysterio]

Were these errors corrected in Beta 3?  I checked the Beta 3 tutorial and noticed many of them are still outstanding, or have been changed and are still erroneous. If you plan to fix them before launch, I'll run through the Beta 3 tutorial, again, and create a new thread documenting the errors.

[LadyKaieta]

Were these errors corrected in Beta 3?  I checked the Beta 3 tutorial and noticed many of them are still outstanding, or have been changed and are still erroneous. If you plan to fix them before launch, I'll run through the Beta 3 tutorial, again, and create a new thread documenting the errors.

Grammar errors have been corrected

[PinkRose]

You mean, "Grammar errors have been corrected(period)".

[LadyKaieta]

You mean, "Grammar errors have been corrected(period)".

You know, I was starting to like you all...

[LLaney]

 

You mean, "Grammar errors have been corrected(period)".

You know, I was starting to like you all...

 

 

Don't you mean, "y'all"

[LadyKaieta]

 

 

You mean, "Grammar errors have been corrected(period)".

You know, I was starting to like you all...

 

 

Don't you mean, "y'all"