Do the developers read 14 pages in? Hopefully. I think an interesting idea would be less a solid being an more an aspect of the fringes of the human condition, like a "Red god" that represents (when you think about) the pretty brutal cycles of killing other organism to acquire their energy/sustenance. Examples of our underlying fear/powerfantasy of this aspect of the human condition are things like the concept of vampires and the eat-heart-gain-strength nonsense. Maybe people "touched" by this god/force could kill/cannibalize other beings and gain some aspect of their abilities.