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Kariwm_Klawm

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  1. Hiya, First post - I'm not really a forum posting guy, but KOTOR 2 has so utterly emotionally and intellectually inspired me I HAD to post, and the KOTOR III post is scary and a bit silly. What would I write if I were a Star Wars Author? My story would start in a lovely lush world (similar to a glorified Dantooine) where our character starts their life in a small village on an essentially dead planet: Most of the lands are covered in the 'echoes' of the force, essentially physical emanations of ghosts of force echoes - a planet which picks up echoes in the force from force sensitives deaths and presents these people as sketches of their personalities in their final moments. this has made the planet a dead world- in constant turmoil and battle and the forces of dead Jedi and Sith eternally wage wars. You are shunned and outcast from your village because you are a force sensitive - a 'demon' like the foul forces who slaughter their phantom enemies, killing the few stranded survivors on the dead world who cling to life. Surviving through luck and strength of will without the defense of his/her family and the village she meets in a cave (entered to try to escape the mad phantoms batting on the surface), he/she (he for simplicity) meets phantom Kreia, who wishes to teach her 'final student'. Long story short you are able to escape the world, only to meet up by chance with the exile and Revan in the heart of the Sith Empire. They are building a new order who no longer regards the Sith or the Jedi as sensible religions, essentially becoming 'gray' Jedi. Revan is the 'heart of the force', the exile is the 'death of the force' and you are the 'meaning of the force' the physical embodiment of a vast destiny which concludes with your choices, which no longer essentially are based on the limited and pathetic vast opposites of the light and dark side of the force, adventuring in dangerous territories to stop the complete annihilation of the galaxy by the end of the force by either the Sith or (SHOCK the rebuilding of the Jedi order by master Vandar back from the dead) and trying to find reason for the existence of the galaxy and the force. The end of the story therefore concludes with you finding a meaning for the force ever existing at all. This in my opinion would be a reasonably fitting solution to the KOTOR trilogy - not a great one but ok. However, knowing Bioware they will probably just chuck in another ultimate Revan character and a dull romance story and some ordinary dialogue ending in the death of some random Sith lord or two. I'm sorry Bioware fans, but to me Bioware seems to just have perfected the conventional story arcs, much like George Lucas' idiotic idea that there are only 7 types of stories. -Kariwm
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