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Tutorial, Grammatical Errors, Build 2


Mysterio

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Here are the grammatical errors I've found in the tutorial prompts in Build 2 in order of appearance:

  • ​"There are 8 different types of cards: Monsters and Barriers are banes while, Weapons..." S/B "...banes, while Weapons..."
  • ​"Ameiko is a Bard, accomplished with both weapons and magic, she..." S/B "...and magic, who..."
  • "Defeating some scenarios will grant Feats, these..." S/B "...Feats, which..."
  • "Each character has a special set of Skills, here..." S/B "...Skills.  Here..."
  • "Drag the panel up then tap..." S/B "...panel up, and then tap..."
  • "In normal play, you can drag the character portraits to change the turn order, for this tutorial the turn..." S/B "...turn order.  For this tutorial, the turn..."
  • "Display: Show the card temporarily until it is sent elsewhere - usually..." S/B "...elsewhere, usually..."
  • "It is worth discarding for important rolls like monster fights and..." S/B "...rolls, like monster fights, and..."
  • "If you have an armor recharge it, to..." S/B "...armor, recharge it to..."
  • "By playing the right weapon or spell card, you can improve your roll, and your chances..." S/B "...your roll and chances..."
  • "They will cover their tracks drawing from the Blessing Deck - making..." S/B "...Blessing Deck, making..."
  • "If the villain is cornered and defeated - you win!" S/B "...defeated, you win!"
  • "If you are done exploring tap..." S/B "...exploring, tap..."
  • "Ameiko's acrobatics will help her in the Warrens (Top...." S/B "...Warrens (top..."
  • "Each turn a card..." S/B "Each turn, a card..."
  • Also, I've noticed some prompts have punctuation at the end of their sentences while some don't.

You get only one chance to make a first impression, right?   :yes:

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Were these errors corrected in Beta 3?  I checked the Beta 3 tutorial and noticed many of them are still outstanding, or have been changed and are still erroneous. If you plan to fix them before launch, I'll run through the Beta 3 tutorial, again, and create a new thread documenting the errors.

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Were these errors corrected in Beta 3?  I checked the Beta 3 tutorial and noticed many of them are still outstanding, or have been changed and are still erroneous. If you plan to fix them before launch, I'll run through the Beta 3 tutorial, again, and create a new thread documenting the errors.

Grammar errors have been corrected

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Never tell me the odds! I probably wrote them

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