Draken Posted July 10, 2005 Share Posted July 10, 2005 Hello anyone who came here! Well, here's the deal: I've been doing a Parody/AU story of Star Wars Episode 3, and thought I'd post the first chapter here to see what people think. Please post what you thought of it, good or bad. Helpful Criticism is welcome, and enjoy! :D Star Wars Episode 3: Revenge of the Jedi This story is very similar to Matthew Stover Seriously, only like, three people can touch my body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metadigital Posted July 10, 2005 Share Posted July 10, 2005 Wow! Too long. Break up your posts, man, I've got eyestrain from scrolling through it! OBSCVRVM PER OBSCVRIVS ET IGNOTVM PER IGNOTIVS OPVS ARTIFICEM PROBAT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
6 Foot Invisible Rabbit Posted July 10, 2005 Share Posted July 10, 2005 Very nice read. Harvey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkside Posted July 10, 2005 Share Posted July 10, 2005 Very interesting. I like. Post more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draken Posted July 11, 2005 Author Share Posted July 11, 2005 Thank you everyone! Metadigital, it's long because I copied and pasted it from a document. I was going out to lunch when I started the topic, and did'nt have enough time to post it bit by bit. Still, thanks for peoples comments. P.S- I am in the process of creating chapter 2, so you can expect it by tommorrow. Seriously, only like, three people can touch my body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
julianw Posted July 11, 2005 Share Posted July 11, 2005 I am having a hard time imagining Kenobi as a Sith Lord, but good work nonetheless. (Draken - your fanfic link in sig isn't working.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draken Posted July 11, 2005 Author Share Posted July 11, 2005 I am having a hard time imagining Kenobi as a Sith Lord... <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Ah, but there's the thing. Would you believe someone like Palpatine is the kind, caring figure almost everyone thought he was? Besides, Kenobi isn't a Sith, he's just an Emperor. I know that the Sith would have tried to try and overthrow him if he wasn't Force attuned, but I'm going to somehow make them afraid of him. Like I said, it's a work in progress, and I appreciate the comments. P.S- Thanks julian, my siggy should be fixed. Seriously, only like, three people can touch my body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darth jedi Posted July 12, 2005 Share Posted July 12, 2005 this is so cool i love it you should publish it - just what i like Evil LORD KENOBI MHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAA (w00t) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
julianw Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Draken - Just tried to sketch Sith-Lord Kenobi. Not sure if this is what you had in mind. It's not that impressive :"> , but as least I kept my words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draken Posted July 15, 2005 Author Share Posted July 15, 2005 ...Julian, that is AWESOME! That's almost exactly how I imagined him! Thank you very much! :D Seriously, only like, three people can touch my body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
julianw Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 You are most welcome. It was fun drawing an evil character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draken Posted July 15, 2005 Author Share Posted July 15, 2005 Here it is! Chapter Two! :D And just for you metadigital, I made it all in one post! Mwahahahahaha! Chapter Two The dark room that was known as the Justice Seriously, only like, three people can touch my body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
julianw Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 I finally caught up with the story. (I missed the beginning of Episode III in theater, hence a bit lost in chap 1. ^_^ ) Good job with the story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draken Posted August 16, 2005 Author Share Posted August 16, 2005 Just when you though you were out...I pull you back in! Voila'! Chapter 3! Chapter 3 General Grievous stood on the bridge of the Star Ship Justice Seriously, only like, three people can touch my body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metadigital Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Too long to read. OBSCVRVM PER OBSCVRIVS ET IGNOTVM PER IGNOTIVS OPVS ARTIFICEM PROBAT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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